My site

bizmark

Anyway after around 13 hour's

Odyssey Galaxy class site

it isnt finished yet still have a lot of work ahead how ever most pages are up and have something on them.

Feedback wanted:)

feylya

Hmm, not bad. You missplet Weapon though. The navigation is very odd for some reason. I'm probably just used to having it on the other side. A lot of the text is very squashed on some of the pages too. But for a quick site, it's not bad.

bizmark

Squashed how so ?

:ninja: lol im new at this html really

feylya

In the class history section, the text just seems crowded in there. Personally, I'd put in a header onto the top of the table and add some padding. Maybe smaller text or a different font.

bizmark

Or some pictures to break up the HUGE block of text

feylya

Yeah, something like that. Again, it's just my opinion. Still, cool site all the same.

Woden

cool stuff bizmark i think captain is spelt wrong with respect to the captains yacht on that page :eek:

also at the moment the blueprints and picture and size chart sections don't seem to be working.

i like the snapshot from the dominion war with the large amount of fed ships though its cool

bizmark

also at the moment the blueprints and picture and size chart sections don't seem to be working.

Their not ready yet

Iv changed the class history abit adding a few pictures

think captain is spelt wrong

Ya being half blind from the montor and a normal crapness at spelling wll be showing up:)

Woden

the class history is better now with the pictures and its breaks it up well like feyla suggested.

bizmark

Added a good few new things includeing blueprints and size charts

simu

I like the look of it but watch out for spelling mistakes:

Updates not Update's, thrusters not thrusters - there is no apostrophe if you're just using the plural of a noun.

Dorsal not Dorsel.

Jean-Luc Picard not jean-luc-picard

There may be more, I'm not a walking spell-checker!

When you have lists, why do some words start with capitals while other ones don't?

For example:

Length:
641 meters
width:
467.1 meters
height:
137.5 meters
Displacement:
4,500,000 metric ton's
Crew:
1,012 persons

It would look more regular if you used punctuation in a uniform manner.

These are just minor quibbles, though - overall, it looks quite cool.

bizmark

Noted and being fixed as fast as i can

bizmark

most of them should be fixed now

Woden

Hey bizmark it looks good, i like the size chart, the look of all the different fed ships together is cool and the blueprints look nice

LastIrishMonkey

nice site, well done.

bizmark

Thank you

iv just added all the deck blueprints to the site over 6 meg of blueprints just for the decks of the ship (42 in all)

Woden

hi bizmark, the blueprints by deck are cool, the link to the main bridge gif there doesn't seem to be working, is this feature still to be added?

bizmark

opps ill add that now

bizmark

done

Cabaal

You might want to put the site updates/news the other way around
Latest at the top rather then the way you have it.
Much easier to ready the site then...

bizmark

ya ill do all that after Xmas