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hostyle

twined about your twisting form thinking i am someone else in another world so different
from this that i know and hate
so well and greedily i feed
in that other place
now lost

and so alone this moment
i dwell in the endurance that the strange
must suffer
as a deep meaningful part of their being

a prison

of such painless torture
that i can no longer
fathom the fairies fingers

of your caress

nor the umbilical essence
in my broken days
the life line that is but a thread

leading to my downfall

and beyond the mourning of my lost world
where i reason with the mind of a god
in the body of a goat

i still care about you
and some other things
foolish things

no-one should have to suffer

MojoMaker

Apart from anything else, with one or two small changes, this would make great material for a new Metallica track - 'Downfall'. Seriously! Nice one.

simu

No offense but it comes across as run of the mill teenage angst.

hostyle

No offence taken. I think I was a teenager, when I wrote that. Re-found it again recently. Stood out above a lot of mediocre crap I had written back then