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singers/poets etc.

elburro_grande · 2004-05-01 22:16:50

im sure there are alot of very talented people out there so i want to see your songs, poems, limericks, whatever you do: just to get the ball rolling here is one of my songs: left behind the greatest absence ever seen, the greatest acheivement thats ever been the lonliest affair ive had to bear im almost, almost, almost…

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01-05-2004 11:16pm

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elburro_grande

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im sure there are alot of very talented people out there so i want to
see your songs, poems, limericks, whatever you do:
just to get the ball rolling here is one of my songs:

left behind
the greatest absence ever seen,
the greatest acheivement thats ever been
the lonliest affair ive had to bear im almost,
almost, almost there.
a disturbing amount i have portrayed,
as the artic circles being displayed.

<chorus>
i feel awful as usual, its just me
i feel alone as usual, its just me
no can see me left behind

the shortest absence known to man
my achievment is what i can
the most dangerous affair
we'll never get there

<repeat chorus twice>

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#2 05-05-2004 10:18am
hippu

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theres already creative writing forums on this board, not that im complaining

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