difference between men/woman a example

Brock · 08-07-2004 12:42am #1

Remember the book "Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus"?
Here's a prime example offered by an English professor at an American
University.

"Today we will experiment with a new form called the tandem story.
The process is simple. Each person will pair off with the person sitting to
his or her immediate right. One of you will then write the first
paragraph of a short story. The partner will read the first
paragraph and then add another paragraph to the story. The first
person will then add a third paragraph, and so on back and forth. Remember to
re-read what has been written each time in order to keep the story
coherent.

There is to be absolutely NO talking and anything you wish to say
must be written on the paper. The story is over when both agree a
conclusion has been reached." The following was actually turned in by two of
my English students: Rebecca (last name deleted), and Gary (last
name deleted).

THE STORY:

(First paragraph by Rebecca)

At first, Laurie couldn't decide which kind of tea she wanted. The
chamomile which used to be her favorite for lazy evenings at home,
now reminded her too much of Carl, who once said, in happier
times, that he
liked chamomile.

But she felt she must now, at all costs, keep her mind off Carl.
His
possessiveness was suffocating, and if she thought about him too
much her asthma started acting up again. So chamomile was out of
the question.

(second paragraph by Gary)

Meanwhile, Advance Sergeant Carl Harris, leader of the attack now in orbit over Skylon 4, had more important things to think
about than the neuroses of an air-headed asthmatic bimbo named
Laurie with whom he had spent one sweaty night over a year ago.
"A.S. Harris to Geostation 17,???*??

he said into his transgalactic communicator. "Polar orbit
established.
No sign of resistance so far..." But before he could sign off a
bluish particle beam flashed out of nowhere and blasted a hole
through his ship's cargo bay.

The jolt from the direct hit sent him flying out of his seat and
across
the cockpit.

(Rebecca)

He bumped his head and died almost immediately but not before he
felt
one last pang of regret for psychically brutalizing the one woman
who had ever had feelings for him. Soon afterwards, Earth stopped
its pointless hostilities towards the peaceful farmers of Skylon
4. "Congress Passes Law Permanently Abolishing War and Space
Travel," Laurie read in her newspaper one morning. The news
simultaneously excited her and bored her. She stared out the
window, dreaming of her youth, when the days had passed
unhurriedly and carefree, with no newspapers to read, no
television to distract her from her sense of innocent wonder at
all the beautiful things round her. "Why must one lose one's
innocence to become a woman?" she pondered wistfully.

(Gary)

Little did she know, but she had less than 10 seconds to live.
Thousands of miles above the city, the Anu'udrian mothership
launched the first of its lithium fusion missiles. The dim-witted
wimpy peaceniks who pushed the Unilateral Aerospace Disarmament
Treaty through the congress had left Earth a defenseless target
for the hostile alien empires who were determined to destroy the
human race. Within two hours after the passage of the treaty the
Anu'udrian ships were on course for Earth, carrying enough
firepower to pulverize the entire planet. With no one to stop
them, they swiftly initiated their diabolical plan. The lithium
fusion missile entered the atmosphere unimpeded. The President, in
his top-secret Mobile submarine headquarters on the ocean floor
off the coast of Guam, felt the inconceivably massive explosion,
which vaporized poor, stupid, Laurie and 85 million other
Americans. The President slammed his fist on the conference table.
"We can't allow this! I'm going ! to veto that treaty! Let's blow
'e m out of the sky!"

(Rebecca)

This is absurd. I refuse to continue this mockery of literature.
My
writing partner is a violent, chauvinistic semi-literate
adolescent.

(Gary)

Yeah? Well, you're a self-centered tedious neurotic whose attempts
at
writing are the literary equivalent of Valium. "Oh shall I have
chamomile tea? Or shall I have some other sort of ****ING TEA???
Oh no,
I'm such an air headed bimbo who reads too many Danielle Steele
novels."

(Rebecca)

Asshole.

(Gary)

Bitch.

(Rebecca)

DICK!

(Gary)

Slut.

(Rebecca)

Get ****ed.

(Gary)

Eat ****.

(Rebecca)

**** YOU - YOU NEANDERTHAL!!!

(Gary)

Go drink some tea - whore.

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(TEACHER)

A+ - I really liked this one.