Yam-Man (by OmniCorp)

Deadwing · 03-11-2004 8:55pm

frodi wrote:

your yam man doesn't suck as much as deadwing

aw man, now you hurt MY feelings. I have to go write in my journal about this

omnicorp · 04-11-2004 8:06pm

and you didn't hurt mine!?
No reason as to what could be done to improve it OR what is even wrong with it.
Only mindless threats.

MrNuked · 04-11-2004 9:43pm

be more orginal. Make yam man more consistent, give him his own perspective.

omnicorp · 05-11-2004 6:03pm

ok, whats
a) unoriginal about it.
b) whats inconsistent about it?

MrNuked · 05-11-2004 6:11pm

Well you're just stating a facts in a vafguely sarcastic manner really. Which would be fine if the facts themselves were something observant or thought provoking. They're not it's stuff everyone knows. You need to be original in what you say or how you say it or both for it to be interesting.
What he says in the last frame of the cartoon doesn't seem consistent with the way he talks in the rest of it. It's just commentary.

Blisterman · 06-11-2004 9:01pm

All you have to do is change the text in 3 frames to change the storyline completly. In fact you could make a whole series like that.

billy the squid · 06-11-2004 9:27pm

omnicorp wrote:

i'm better with pen and paper but sadly I do not have a scanner and my skills with ms paint are limited BUT I am not sure whether you saw the Ym-man in the original thread or my new one, so here it is:

having the text overlapping onto the picture makes it impossible to read , try using speech bubbles like like they have in the cartoons you see in the newspapers.

this should be thread of the month btw

aidan_walsh · 06-11-2004 9:29pm

billy the squid wrote:

this should be thread of the month btw

And before you say thanks, I don't think it was intended as a compliment.

billy the squid · 06-11-2004 9:37pm

Correct I was referring to the thread and only the thread, not the joke just the thread ok.

http://www.google.com/search?q=omnicorp&start=0&start=0&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&client=firefox-a&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official

that might cheer you up

omnicorp · 08-11-2004 7:51pm

it does. Thanks.
Could anyone provide with any story lines?

pickarooney · 09-11-2004 11:30am

I've a sneaking suspicion that Omnicorp is simply a refined version of Eliza. If so, kudos to the programmer, if not kudus, cause they're all majestic an' all.