Can you rap? let the people decide

Dragan

barge wrote:

patiently waitin for the day something special inside me awakens that will make me the greatest.

that pretty much sums it up alright.

I imagine, in your own head you are making a statement, but your verse says nothing to me to be honest.

Basically what your saying is " I'm a young guy, who occasionally might engage in some criminal activities to feel hard and i like a joint now and then."

That's it?

Dragan

Makaveli wrote:

If he bit my line that would imply that I already did write something.

Who bit your line?

barge

lets all write about our lifestyles to be criticised by this bitch in denial,you take time to rhyme actin like you never done lines,is it a crime to be tongue in cheek?well then lock me the **** up and throw away the key,he can read minds well he read mine,il show you petty crime and watch you die inside,commenting snide thinkin im some little kid,well that would work to your benefit,,patronising me like im some bitch,which way do you want to respond so i can lyrically assault accept your applause and finish off your downfall.....

Dooom

Wow, just found my..ahem..writings from a good while back. By the looks of it it's fairly alcohol or drug in-fueled, so don't judge too harshly..:o

Do your worst Makaveli!

barge

sorry king dragan

barge

Makaveli wrote:

That last line is so bitten from my hardk0re rap and just reworked.

ok ya muppet

barge

duckcooker34@hotmail.com,get in contact if you live in dublin,i starting a crew,any1 interested leave a msge sick of posting lyrics i want 2 spit,any skill level,im 19

David19

barge cut out the personal abuse, there's no need for it.

Dragan

David19 wrote:

barge cut out the personal abuse, there's no need for it.

Yeah , but that makes him street you see.

LegacyUser

I am ashamed to say I like hip hop music when there are people like Barge around...

Pasty white boys thinking there ghetto cos they smoke spliffs and drink tins. Big ****ing wow.

barge

cheesedude wrote:

I am ashamed to say I like hip hop music when there are people like Barge around...

Pasty white boys thinking there ghetto cos they smoke spliffs and drink tins. Big ****ing wow.

why would i think im ghetto,never said that once,im from a council estate in dublin,the **** i sed happens in dublin everyday,not 1 thing i say does not happen..in future il rap about sunsets,moonlight and teddybears,awww is'nt dat cute>

Dragan

barge wrote:

why would i think im ghetto,never said that once,im from a council estate in dublin,the **** i sed happens in dublin everyday,not 1 thing i say does not happen..in future il rap about sunsets,moonlight and teddybears,awww is'nt dat cute>

Indeed it does, but do you do it? And if so , is that the most interesting thing that you do all day, and is that the best way you can express it?

Rap is not about being a criminal, or a thug... it's about telling your story in a way that is interesting and relevant to the people who want to listen.

If you really do all the stuff you do then well done, your a low life thug with no future who will most likely die young. THATS REALITY. Rappers who rap about crime and idolise it, whether they have been involved or not, are not people to be looked up to. Not only that but it's a subject matter than has been done to death and is rarely is ever described in an original way.

Your taking the fact that people don't like your stuff as a personal attack, when what you should be saying is, these guys are not liking my stuff, why?

Artists question themsevles and always try and grow. Do you really think the first song Jon Lennon wrote was "Imagine"?

evil_seed

^^^^^^^
Post of the year

barge

i find a seat thats not ripped to pieces,throw away my ticket cos i no longer need it,the sleep i dream of remains ever distant,cant knock off cant help but listen to the sound of a pre pubescent injecting,traffics congested,she looks breathless,helpless to impending addiction,smacks inflicted as her mate figits with a bus ticket,my seats being kicked ever since i picked it to sit in,a young mother that cant control her children,they need ritalin or some **** to chill them,like she gets chilled by filling skins and licking em.

Beefeater

just wrote this there messing about,quickly no time to improve it. think of it loopin with blackstars brown skin lady, thats what i was singing to myself. Feedback welcome, especially MODS:

YO! If i was a casualty of MTV- I'd be a casualty to ADD- my complexities compacted to a state of normality- memory like a goldfish,not like those Duracell batteries- These corporations casually conduct our minds into a state of brain freeze - They have you played like a Jackass, got me wondering "Is this the US Goverment?"- 'More or Less' you've been Punk'd into how your creativity should be spent - U wanna Pimp My Ride, well i'd rather you Pimped My Brain- Knowledge, Wisdom and Understanding have much more value than rims and chains- Oh!, and isnt it a shame you got that luxury car for your Sweet 16th- Too bad most kids in the world can't even conjure these images in their dreams!

djeoinc

nobody can out wit or out express this rhyme feast
because I don’t care what people say on this thread

high is the words I describe when I speak the word
the music I love dearly really peppers my taste buds

so if I can make up some thing on the spot that sound hot
I believe I m not who I used to be and im not going to

boast about the most I have I don’t do greed its not really about
talking s-so obscure is my path that I take as I hide behind the clouds

as the sun begins to bake my pale white skin and im drowned in sin
in the depths of the dungeons of what dwells with in

in the belly of the beast my action and thoughts are unleashed
I may hit the roof in the morning but the days are still burning

more of a poem than a rhyme that I preach if you want to learn
from me I shall teach I shall teach and totally reach

my ****ing goal for world domination cause your own tail yell be chasing
while I stay stern to my station

djeoinc

implant words in your head implant words in your head
putt ideas to the paper and the paper to the pen
it doesnt really matter if it was now and then
events through out history are just happenin again
you have to read between the blured lines cause no one
can denie that we are living in burning times
pychological warfare out side our front door
memories arased a way from which used to be stored
put ideas in your head put ideas in your head

never dreamed id grow up in a world like this
i dont know were its going i dont know when will end
as i stand at the cross roads i see no amends
2000 years of blood shed seen through a generation of eyes

skateing dragon

I'll ignite like the human torch/get sweat drippin from ya pores//
Leave yours ears soar/not knowin what came out these vocal chords//
You'll think im Mr.T the way i pity that fool//
He's so nervous instead of sweat patches he's got swimmin pools//
Cause physical stillness severe mental illness//
Your so fake make me wanna try feel it//
Words echo in your mind/you gotta let go bob your head its fine//
It's not as bad as half sh*t you do in your spare time//
Im oil of olay gonna spoil your day//
On fire so i'll leave you boiled and played//
Im god appolo and if ya wanna follow//
Your suckin me dry like a water bottle//
Man your rhymes are a wild miss you couldnt style this//
Even when u piss you miss man thats just childish//

Beefeater

Anybody(mods where r ye?) wanna give me some feedback on my rhyme a little up the page?

djeoinc

ye that ryhme was smooth wity and to the point exactly whats goin on in the world 2 day nice one keep up the good work

j2u

heres a rhyme i thought up a while back its not relative to anything really but i dont think that thats important.have to add to it so its pretty short right now

Always expect the unexpected,i could die and come back ressurected
when i have sex its always protected,with a bulletproof vest on my chest
whenever my dicks erected,im currently 19 ,i go asleep i have crazy dreams about crazy things about participating in the music scene,

Time Magazine

Yo my name's Grift and I spray down town if you catch my drift. Trains and planes, ain't no shame in my game. Keeping it urban, down with the countries too. I tag this here, my lunch-time's coup. Revolution to the masses, that's what I always say. Respect to the middle-classes, ain't got no crappy Barry's Tae because for me it's only the real shizzle yo', Lyons got it going on don't you know. Because lines are what I'm up for, tagging shitty crap till the point that I'm a stupid whore. With nothing better to do with my time, just like teary Michael Neary, as a crap art student out in Dun Laoighaire. What, my crap "art" makes you weary?

projectmayhem

Ibid wrote:

Yo my name's Grift and I spray down town if you catch my drift. Trains and planes, ain't no shame in my game. Keeping it urban, down with the countries too. I tag this here, my lunch-time's coup. Revolution to the masses, that's what I always say. Respect to the middle-classes, ain't got no crappy Barry's Tae because for me it's only the real shizzle yo', Lyons got it going on don't you know. Because lines are what I'm up for, tagging shitty crap till the point that I'm a stupid whore. With nothing better to do with my time, just like teary Michael Neary, as a crap art student out in Dun Laoighaire. What, my crap "art" makes you weary?

get this man a can of coke

craze7

This is one of my new songs, written and produced by me!!!!

Strugglin Feat. Tracy Chapman
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4000766&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4000766&q=hi

Tar.Aldarion

Orizio wrote:

The fact that anybody immediately equates being a rapper with materialism and gangsterism shows they should start listening to Dance music or Metal or some other crap where lyricism is irrelevent.

...And you insult other people after coming out with something so moronic?

Call Me Jimmy

craze7 wrote:

This is one of my new songs, written and produced by me!!!!

Strugglin Feat. Tracy Chapman
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4000766&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4000766&q=hi

Just out of curiosity, how did you do the beat? Like is it from electric drums or is it some sort of drum software (sorry I'm a n00bjob)

craze7

sort of, that beat was made on "computer muzy" which is a free program that come with the "computer music" mag every month..

the drums are from a vsti instrument i downloaded off some website its called "dr-fusion 2" [the drum machine that is] ands its deadly...

i took the sample from an old tracy chapman song and looped it!

thanks for listening!

madsparkz

her is my rap its not dat gud but neway its about soccer

im on da field
im in my game
wen i get da ball
i drive u insane
ders notin u can do
axept act like a fool

muthaf***** u cant stop me
u must be crazy
ill curl da ball in da net
i place it it goes in a bet
of course it goes in da net

0-1 up
u r so f***ed
i got my head in da game
ders notin u can do but
giv up in shame

muthaf**** u cant stop me
u must be crazy
ill curl da ball in da net
i place it it goes in i bet
of course it goes in da net

0-2
and its da final whistle
and da score is 0 to 2
face it
we destroyed u!

phenomenon

craze7 wrote:

This is one of my new songs, written and produced by me!!!!

Strugglin Feat. Tracy Chapman
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4000766&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4000766&q=hi

Well done mate, I liked the song. Nice work.

Nu-Centz

http://nu-centz.bebo.com
http://www.myspace.com/nucentz

full bio available

spacecoyote

madsparkz wrote:

her is my rap its not dat gud but neway its about soccer

im on da field
im in my game
wen i get da ball
i drive u insane
ders notin u can do
axept act like a fool

muthaf***** u cant stop me
u must be crazy
ill curl da ball in da net
i place it it goes in a bet
of course it goes in da net

0-1 up
u r so f***ed
i got my head in da game
ders notin u can do but
giv up in shame

muthaf**** u cant stop me
u must be crazy
ill curl da ball in da net
i place it it goes in i bet
of course it goes in da net

0-2
and its da final whistle
and da score is 0 to 2
face it
we destroyed u!

cn we nt gt rid of d txtspk pls!!!!

Makaveli

spacecoyote banned for using text speak.*




*

not really.

spacecoyote

how bout transformerspeak then?

Orizio

^^^WTF???I swear to god your one disturbed little child Spacecoyote...:D

Makaveli

Why is C there twice? That's a load of crap I can't even make out half the letters. Transformer Alphabet Robot get out of it.

madsparkz

spacecoyote wrote:

cn we nt gt rid of d txtspk pls!!!!

yeah

madsparkz

anuter rap from da amazin me!

im in skool
travellin from class 2 class
teacher tells me dont act like an ass
skool is for f**kers
who r 2 shy 2 talk 2 each uder
nd yes its tru
im 2 ledgend 4 skool!

skool is so borin
da only sound u hear is some1 snorin
but in da yard
its quite different
ur free nd loose
out playin wit ya crews
just chillen wit ya friends
until da yard ends!

bak in class lukin at da time
instead of listenin ur tinkin of a rime
da rimes about skool
so borin it makes u drool
cant wait 4 da ring on da clock
so u can go home round da block
cus its da last day of skool
ur happier dan a drunken fool
oh no!next its secondry skool!!
i wz in skool
travellin from class 2 class
teacher tells me dont act like an ass
skool is for f**kers
who r 2 shy 2 talk 2 each uder
and yes its tru
im 2 legend 4 skool!!

madsparkz

visit my thread for more rappin!
search rap battlin!

funky_buddah

Im a lightweight, for real, but dont call me Naseem, I skyhook motherphuckers like my name was Careem, Im mild mannered, well groomed,polite and clean but shred haters to confetti like Im Yngwie Malmsteen, Im no virtuoso, like Joe Satch and Stu Hamm, just a 6 string assasin for the Metalcore clan, with a drink in my hand, pull an MJ if I can, jesus juice in a cola can BIAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTCHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Haha, Im forever coming up with raps just for the craic. And Ill buy anybody who knows who Yngwie Malmsteen,Joe Satch and Stu Hamm are a Coke;)

Makaveli

Yeah, guitarists, wooooo!

madsparkz maybe you should have stayed in school and learned how to spell.

spacecoyote

funky_buddah wrote:

Haha, Im forever coming up with raps just for the craic. And Ill buy anybody who knows who Yngwie Malmsteen,Joe Satch and Stu Hamm are a Coke;)

Do I get a diet coke for listening to some Stu Hamm - outbound, the tenacity of Genes & Dreams, Charlotte's song, etc.... Have a nice little compilation a mate made for me with him, Vic Wooten & Frank Solari on it, good stuff.


Oh and mods, can we please hand out a little txtspeak ban, just to discourage the tripe being posted up on here. Yes school obviously isn't his forte, but then again he is a ledgend* , so what are we to say?



*is this some kind of joining of two words to mean the end of a ledge???

deepbeing

Audio: http://media.putfile.com/Ijjy---VA-Diss

Lyrics:

If you wanna talk the talk then walk the walk,
Cuz you ain't doing yourself favours if your vocals bore,
If I speed rap will I see the bullet of my mack,
My shells do the talking it's telling me attack,
Would you blame me if I had to let the finger off my gat,
Cuz these cats don't understand, face to face can't bust no facts,
Straight to Bass, straight to interlace a haters case,
These cats can't interpretate their own tracks, it's all fake.

spacecoyote

yes indeed, its all fake, as opposed the the gat you obviously carry round the streets of compton

deepbeing

i wouldn't admit to anything, just check the gun crime figures in hackney for this year and last year. case rested.

madsparkz

Makaveli wrote:

Yeah, guitarists, wooooo!

madsparkz maybe you should have stayed in school and learned how to spell.

yeah may-b i shud lern 2 spell properli!!

funky_buddah

spacecoyote wrote:

Do I get a diet coke for listening to some Stu Hamm - outbound, the tenacity of Genes & Dreams, Charlotte's song, etc.... Have a nice little compilation a mate made for me with him, Vic Wooten & Frank Solari on it, good stuff.


Oh and mods, can we please hand out a little txtspeak ban, just to discourage the tripe being posted up on here. Yes school obviously isn't his forte, but then again he is a ledgend* , so what are we to say?



*is this some kind of joining of two words to mean the end of a ledge???

I may even stretch my offer to a Diet Coke and Lime for someone with your knowledge.

projectmayhem

Makaveli wrote:

Yeah, guitarists, wooooo!

none of that sarcasm! guitars ftw!
(if that wasn't sarcasm, let this be a warning to other guitar haters )

madsparkz wrote:

yeah may-b i shud lern 2 spell properli!!

unfortunately for regulars here and the general irish hip-hop community, this clown and his ilk are your representation.

Orizio

Excuse me?Since when does Madsparkz and his ilk represent Irish Hip-Hop fans?