My latest film!

shnaek

Howdo! I entered my latest film 'Clock Stopper Chopper' in the Robbie Williams video contest at
http://www.robbiewilliams.com/rudeboxshorts/

'twould be much appreciated if anyone here would vote for it and help a fellow Irish lad win it!!
Either way I'd love to get yer opinions.
Cheers!

craze7

not bad man but i really thought/hoped music was gonna kick in when he put the tape in the walk man. silent movies kinda suck!!!!

any way some good camera work in there and was an easy watch..

keep it up.

BlitzKrieg

but i really thought/hoped music was gonna kick in when he put the tape in the walk man. silent movies kinda suck!!!!

uhmm...

Might be a fault at your end, there's music playing throughout the entire piece.

fade2black

Excellent effort.

shnaek

Thanks for the feedback. It's brilliant to get some reactions! Much appreciated. Cheers.

craze7

BlitzKrieg wrote:

uhmm...

Might be a fault at your end, there's music playing throughout the entire piece.

oh yeah...

damn speakers!!!:D

Average-Ro

Just a few points:

-The first cut is a jump cut, don't know if this was on purpose, but it didn't look that good.

- Four shots to get him up the stairs!?! Too much IMO, one will do. Rule of editing: Have a reason to cut (Cut must be motivated). THe shot of him goin up the stairs shot through the bedroom door had no reason to be there.

- Another jump cut when he goes into the bathroom.

- The two cut before the last one don't work (but that's just my opinion!)

Hope you don't think I'm picking on you or anything, just giving you feedback!

shnaek

It's always good for the learning process to get constructive feedback. And on Christmas day no less!