An Téamh Domhanda(Global Warming)-Essay Plan

GretchenWieners

Hey has anybody prepared an essay on An Téamh Domhanda? I have vocab learnt from Dréimire but I'm finding it very tough to actually come up with an essay for it. Anybody got some suggestions for 5 paragrpahs? I'd really appreciate it, have an exam on it tomorrow!

tolosenc

Oscailt - Bain úsáid as iomhá nó figiúirí dochreidte no mar sin.
Par 2 - An fadhb sa lá atá inniu ann.
Par 3 - An raibh an fhadhb seo i gcónaí?
Par 4 - Cúiseanna na faidhbe
Par 5 - Réiteach na faidhbe (i do thuairim)
Críoch - Amach an seo, ...

Obraíonn an pleann seo de gach aiste a mbeadh á scríobh agat faoi FADHB.
Bí cinnte chun seanfhocail agus abairtí Gaeilge atá foghlaimthe agat a úsáid. Agus, i ndeireadh na dála, tá 80% de na marcanna ag dul ar do chuid Gaeilge seachas na pointi a ndéanann tú nó do chumas 'Iriseoireacht'.

Nó an bhfuil an post seo le tastáil uait as Béarla?

GretchenWieners

My Irish isn't the greatest but thanks a million!

tolosenc

Here's a translation, just so you don't miss anything:

Opening - Use an image/something shocking etc.
Par 2 - The problem today (How it manifests itself)
Par 3 - Was there always a problem?
Par 4 - Causes of the problem
Par 5 - Solution to the problem (In your opinion)
Críoch - Another image: Some time, in the future, ...

This plan works for pretty much any essay you'll have to write about a problem. Be sure to use seanfhocail and bland, yet correct, phrases which you have learned. And at the end of the day, 80% of the marks go for your usage of Gaeilge, rather than the points you make, or your journalistic ability.

GretchenWieners

Thanks I did the test earlier, only got 20mins to do it!! I got 1 1/2 pages done, wasn't too pleased with it but oh well! Thanks a mill anyway.