'Love Like a Dove' new song, opinions please

Dark Artist

Hi!

I started writing this song as a joke for one of my friends, but turned out to actually like the way it was going, so I finished it! It's a very short piano/vocal tune.

http://www.box.net/shared/md70e50q26

Sorry for the not-amazing quality - the audio is a rip from my video camera. The lyrics are intentionally silly and nonsensical, due to the original idea :rolleyes: anyway, please let me know your opinions, good or bad!


Lyrics

Ciara, Ciara
Your love is like a dove flying in the sky

You've got a lot of little things that you want to do
You've got a lot of little things
But you never think them through
You've got a lot, you've got a lot
You've got a lot of little things that you want to do
You've got a lot of little things
But you never think them through

But Ciara, Ciara
Your love is like a dove flying in the sky

Dark Artist

61 views and no opinions? Surely it can't be that bad can it?

I realise this is a quiet forum but please spare a few words.

Steve_o

Its not bad.

Dark Artist

Okay one more so please and that should do it...