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After writing nothing for years I suddenly got an urge last night and wrote 5 or 6 poems. This is an acknowledgment of that, which I suppose is pretty obvious. I'll probably change this a lot before I'm happy with it so this could be considered a 'rough draft'. I also found it interesting that I used to always write about emotions I'd never felt and my poems all rhymed. Now I'm writing about what I actually feel and my poems don't rhyme. Strange how it works!


Nothing but silence
for years until
memories in making,
sore hearts,
and new experiences,
open floodgates
long forgotten
and out flows ink
and words.

shiv

Congrats on getting your muse back

I think non-rhyming poems are generally better myself.

I think you could lose the last two lines to make the poem stronger. They're not necessary. I like the way you've paced the words.