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Favourite erotic poems

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  • 05-02-2008 1:37pm
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    Registered Users Posts: 564 ✭✭✭


    Can anyone recommend favourite erotic poems please? The internet is not proving very good. I'm looking for some clever quirky modern stuff that is accessible and tasteful. No porn. Its dull. Prefer romance, sensuality, passion, humour etc. Looking into romantics etc but would greatly appreciate suggestions. Thanks in advance.


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,314 ✭✭✭Talliesin


    Well, there's such a variety it's hard to know how to answer.

    Would you be looking for something like "she being brand" by E. E. Cummings
    she being Brand

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    was the first ride and believe i we was
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    And of course the fragments of Sappho are always worth re-reading every now again.
    “When I look on you a moment, then I can speak no more, but my tongue falls silent, and at once a delicate flame courses beneath my skin, and with my eyes I see nothing, and my ears hum, and a wet sweat bathes me, and a trembling seizes me all over”
    Something that's often under-stated about Sappho is how good she was on the eroticism of the male form.
    To a Handsome Man

    If you are my friend, stand up before me
    and scatter the grace that's in your eyes.
    But of course it was her appreciation of the female form for which she remains well known. Let's have a modern poet continuing the same line:
    My Mouth Hovers Across Your Breasts

    My mouth hovers across your breasts
    in the short grey winter afternoon
    in this bed we are delicate
    and touch so hot with joy we amaze ourselves
    tough and delicate we play rings
    around each other our daytime candle burns
    with its peculiar light and if the snow
    begins to fall outside filling the branches
    and if the night falls without announcement
    there are the pleasures of winter
    sudden, wild and delicate your fingers
    exact my tongue exact at the same moment
    stopping to laugh at a joke
    my love hot on your scent on the cusp of winter
    Adrienne Riche

    Continuing that line, but switching to the men, probably the most famous homoerotic poem of the last century is James Kirkup's "The Love that Dares to Speak its Name". It failed to bring society to its knees, despite the successful prosecution for blasphemy. In all, it's not bad, but it's hardly great. If it wasn't for the criminal case that followed we'd have forgotten it by now.
    As they took him from the cross
    I, the centurion, took him in my arms-
    the tough lean body
    of a man no longer young,
    beardless, breathless,
    but well hung.

    He was still warm.
    While they prepared the tomb
    I kept guard over him.
    His mother and the Magdalen
    had gone to fetch clean linen
    to shroud his nakedness.

    I was alone with him.
    For the last time
    I kissed his mouth. My tongue
    found his, bitter with death.
    I licked his wound-
    the blood was harsh
    For the last time
    I laid my lips around the tip
    of that great cock, the instrument
    of our salvation, our eternal joy.
    The shaft, still throbbed, anointed
    with death's final ejaculation

    I knew he'd had it off with other men-
    with Herod's guards, with Pontius Pilate,
    With John the Baptist, with Paul of Tarsus
    with foxy Judas, a great kisser, with
    the rest of the Twelve, together and apart.
    He loved all men, body, soul and spirit. - even me.

    So now I took off my uniform, and, naked,
    lay together with him in his desolation,
    caressing every shadow of his cooling flesh,
    hugging him and trying to warm him back to life.
    Slowly the fire in his thighs went out,
    while I grew hotter with unearthly love.

    It was the only way I knew to speak our love's proud name,
    to tell him of my long devotion, my desire, my dread-
    something we had never talked about. My spear, wet with blood,
    his dear, broken body all open wounds,
    and in each wound his side, his back,
    his mouth - I came and came and came

    as if each coming was my last.
    And then the miracle possessed us.
    I felt him enter into me, and fiercely spend
    his spirit's finbal seed within my hole, my soul,
    pulse upon pulse, unto the ends of the earth-
    he crucified me with him into kingdom come.

    -This is the passionate and blissful crucifixion
    same-sex lovers suffer, patiently and gladly.
    They inflict these loving injuries of joy and grace
    one upon the other, till they dies of lust and pain
    within the horny paradise of one another's limbs,
    with one voice cry to heaven in a last divine release.

    Then lie long together, peacefully entwined, with hope
    of resurrection, as we did, on that green hill far away.
    But before we rose again, they came and took him from me.
    They knew not what we had done, but felt
    no shame or anger. Rather they were glad for us,
    and blessed us, as would he, who loved all men.

    And after three long, lonely days, like years,
    in which I roamed the gardens of my grief
    seeking for him, my one friend who had gone from me,
    he rose from sleep, at dawn, and showed himself to me before
    all others. And took me to him with
    the love that now forever dares to speak its name.

    Well, enough of that, it's more historically interesting than any good. The title of course references "Two Loves" by Lord Alfred Douglas, which is a decent poem, but not particularly erotic. His "In Praise of Shame" is more erotic, if at a remove from it:
    Last night unto my bed bethought there came
    Our lady of strange dreams, and from an urn
    She poured live fire, so that mine eyes did burn
    At the sight of it. Anon the floating fame
    Took many shapes, and one cried: "I am shame
    That walks with Love, I am most wise to turn
    Cold lips and limbs to fire; therefore discern
    And see my loveliness, and praise my name."

    And afterwords, in radiant garments dressed
    With sound of flutes and laughing of glad lips,
    A pomp of all the passions passed along
    All the night through; till the white phantom ships
    Of dawn sailed in. Whereat I said this song,
    "Of all sweet passions Shame is the loveliest."

    There's plenty more, but I tried to think of a few of the top of my head that were quite different from each other, to give a few different approaches.

    Let's finish up with another case of straight sexuality being written about from a male perspective:
    Celebration

    When you kneel below me
    and in both your hands
    hold my manhood like a sceptre,

    When you wrap your tongue
    about the amber jewel
    and urge my blessing,

    I understand those Roman girls
    who danced around a shaft of stone
    and kissed it till the stone was warm

    Kneel, love, a thousand feet below me,
    so far I can barely see your mouth and hands
    perform the ceremony,

    Kneel till I topple to your back
    with a groan, like those gods on the roof
    that Samson pulled down.
    Leonard Cohen


  • Registered Users Posts: 564 ✭✭✭cue


    That is great stuff! Exactly what I am looking for. Thanks a lot. Any others?


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,314 ✭✭✭Talliesin


    Well of the above, those from Sappho, Adrienne Riche and Leonard Cohen are quite indicative of some of what else you'll find if you read more.

    If a few more come to mind I'll add a few more examples.


  • Registered Users Posts: 4,944 ✭✭✭Jay P


    Some Barry White...


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 2,916 ✭✭✭RonMexico


    The Dog licked his balls
    So I kicked him
    Bastard

    Oh wait wrong thread sorry... :P


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,314 ✭✭✭Talliesin


    Jay P wrote: »
    Some Barry White...
    It would only count if it sounded erotic in most people's voices.

    Barry White can make most shopping lists seem sexy, it's not the poetry of the words that's doing it :)


  • Registered Users Posts: 564 ✭✭✭cue


    Have to agree about Barry White. With song lyrics it is not so much about the words. It is usually the way it is being sung.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,314 ✭✭✭Talliesin


    There are cases where you have both at the same time though.

    I gave one of Leonard Cohen's poems above, but of course he is better known as a singer-songwriter and personally his voice does it for me more than Barry White's (I lend towards the romantically melancholic though, YMMV). He had published volumes of poetry before his first LP release, which may be related to his being taken more seriously than many others who are both poets and songwriters - though in other cases it's more a matter of decisions that are better for business than they are for art; Jim Morrison's reputation as a poet seriously suffers from poor editing meaning that the gems are lost in sophomoric rubbish that wouldn't have made the cut if it wasn't an attempt to cash in on his enduring Rock-God status.

    Some of Cohen's songs have also been published as poetry ("Suzanne" making it into some of the Norton anthologies and similar, making them as close to being in the canon as we have in these post-canon days), and some of his other song lyrics can also make the cut in this regard IMO. For present purposes, consider the warm nostalgic eroticism of the opening lines to the first and third verses of "Hey, That's No Way to Say Goodbye":
    I loved you in the morning, our kisses deep and warm,
    your hair upon the pillow like a sleepy golden storm,
    yes, many loved before us, I know that we are not new,
    in city and in forest they smiled like me and you,
    but now it's come to distances and both of us must try,
    your eyes are soft with sorrow,
    Hey, that's no way to say goodbye.

    I'm not looking for another as I wander in my time,
    walk me to the corner, our steps will always rhyme
    you know my love goes with you as your love stays with me,
    it's just the way it changes, like the shoreline and the sea,
    but let's not talk of love or chains and things we can't untie,
    your eyes are soft with sorrow,
    Hey, that's no way to say goodbye.

    I loved you in the morning, our kisses deep and warm,
    your hair upon the pillow like a sleepy golden storm,
    yes many loved before us, I know that we are not new,
    in city and in forest they smiled like me and you,
    but let's not talk of love or chains and things we can't untie,
    your eyes are soft with sorrow,
    Hey, that's no way to say goodbye.

    Which leads my train of thought to another of his. For the most part I've been thinking of poetry where the erotic aspect is relatively "pure". Of course the erotic impulses often happen as just one strain of a lot of other things going on. Consider the ultra-short short story in my signature below, it's focus is on how the heroine's crush can't be fulfilled, but the erotic impulse is still in there.

    Edit: This post has inspired me to make a change in my signature. The signature I'm talking about here had been:
    Safe Love (Lydia Davis)
    She was in love with her son's pediatrician. Alone out in the country — could anyone blame her.
    There was an element of grand passion in this love. It was also a safe thing. The man was on the other side of a barrier. Between him and her: the child on the examining table, the office itself, the staff, his wife, her husband, his stethoscope, his beard, her breasts, his glasses, her glasses, etc.


    Which makes me think of his wonderful "Master song" which hints at sadomasochism in many ways, but in a very disapproving way. I'll link to it rather than quote it since it's long and not directly answering your question. But it's led me to an answer to a question I had for myself when I first posted in this thread, which was why could I not think of any good poetry on BDSM, despite that being how I lean sexually. I'm sure there's some good BDSM-positive poetry out there that I just don't know about, but taking this new way of thinking of eroticism in poetry I can think of a good few which touch on it, but not as the sole topic nor in a directly positive way. The lyrics to Fiona Apple's "Criminal" starts with "I've been a bad bad girl" in such a way as to make it completely ambiguous as to whether she's playing at being a "bad girl" as a sexual game, or is truly racked with guilt and self-blame, or a mixture of the two. For a long time my tagline here was a line from Sylvia Plath's "Poppies in July" that hints along similar lines, "If I could bleed, or sleep!—
    If my mouth could marry a hurt like that!" similar is the earlier lines "A mouth just bloodied.
    Little bloody skirts!".

    I've stretched things out to the merest of hints, and following that tangent other cases that hint at sexual desire but are really talking about other things include the line in Tori Amos' "Professional Widow"; "Honey, bring it close to my lips", which hints at kissing or oral sex, but in the context is more likely referring to a gun being used in a suicide attempt. The second meaning is the dominant one, but the first does use eroticism to lend a tactility to the lines.

    And thinking of tactility and modern poetry it's hard not to think of Seamus Heaney, which finally brings to mind an example of a poem that directly answers your question:
    Undine

    He slashed the briars, shovelled up grey silt
    To give me right of way in my own drains
    And I ran quick for him, cleaned out my rust.

    He halted, saw me finally disrobed,
    Running clear, with apparent unconcern.
    Then he walked by me. I rippled and I churned

    Where ditches intersected near the river
    Until he dug a spade deep in my flank
    And took me to him. I swallowed his trench

    Gratefully, dispersing myself for love
    Down in his roots, climbing his brassy grain —
    But once he knew my welcome, I alone

    Could give him subtle increase and reflection.
    He explored me so completely, each limb
    Lost its cold freedom. Human, warmed to him.
    - Seamus Heaney

    While the eroticism of undines is pretty obvious, it's interesting that this has an description of sexual activity (and in particular a sexual conquest of sorts, though in this case her being an undine makes it clear just who has conquered whom) in parallel with a description of another satisfying task, with it highly ambiguous as to which is the metaphor for which - just as the very first poem I quoted above did.

    So, I hope you find that last poem a good enough answer to justify my exploring a few tangents. I've enjoyed thinking around this question, since it does link two of my favourite topics :)


  • Registered Users Posts: 564 ✭✭✭cue


    Wow! Never would have thought of Heaney. Thanks Talliesin


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,314 ✭✭✭Talliesin


    Well, it's the only poem of his I can think of that is erotic all the way through (though plenty touch on sexual themes in one way or another).

    An erotic poem about digging out a ditch. Only Heaney :)


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  • Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,555 ✭✭✭tSubh Dearg


    Right, I've had a root around in my Roger McGough collection and I've found a couple I think are appropriate.
    '6' from Summer with Monka

    i have lately learned to swim
    and now feel more at home
    in the ebb and flow of your slim
    rhythmic tide
    than in the fully dressed
    couldntcareless
    restless world outside
    - Roger McGough

    this one I think is more poignant overall you can still see the eroticism in the middle stanzas.
    The Golden Treasury of Flesh

    Stoned and lonely in the union bar
    looking for a warm student
    to fall upon. Someone gentle
    and understanding. History perhaps?
    Not Maths or English.

    Not English. I'm in
    no mood to be laid
    alongside our literary heritage
    allocated my place in her
    golden treasury of flesh.

    Geography might do the job.
    To snuggle up to
    shifting continents and
    ocean currents. Swap tonnage
    and compare monsoons.

    Even Chemistry. Someone
    tangible. Flasks, bubblings
    and a low flame underneath.
    With someone warm like this
    I'd take my chances.

    Maths would find in my no questions
    English Lit. no answers.
    - Roger McGough


  • Registered Users Posts: 14,714 ✭✭✭✭Earthhorse


    cue wrote: »
    That is great stuff! Exactly what I am looking for. Thanks a lot. Any others?

    Y'know, Talliesin has really put given you some great material to go on in this thread but maybe you should do some reading for yourself? As he says, you might start with the poets he's already mentioned. I might re-iterate cummings, and add John Donne and Edna St. Vincent Millay to the mix. Maybe even some Herbert. To be honest most poets have a few poems that cover the subject though few write exclusively about it.
    Talliesin wrote: »
    An erotic poem about digging out a ditch. Only Heaney :)

    Not to quibble with your choice but I, for one, am going to say "Thank God for that".


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 5 mojokiss13


    John Donne - Elegy 20 - To His Mistress Going to Bed

    C[SIZE=-1]OME[/SIZE], madam, come, all rest my powers defy ;
    Until I labour, I in labour lie.
    The foe ofttimes, having the foe in sight,
    Is tired with standing, though he never fight.
    Off with that girdle, like heaven's zone glittering,
    But a far fairer world encompassing.
    Unpin that spangled breast-plate, which you wear,
    That th' eyes of busy fools may be stopp'd there.
    Unlace yourself, for that harmonious chime
    Tells me from you that now it is bed-time.
    Off with that happy busk, which I envy,
    That still can be, and still can stand so nigh.
    Your gown going off such beauteous state reveals,
    As when from flowery meads th' hill's shadow steals.
    Off with your wiry coronet, and show
    The hairy diadems which on you do grow.
    Off with your hose and shoes ; then softly tread
    In this love's hallow'd temple, this soft bed.
    In such white robes heaven's angels used to be
    Revealed to men ; thou, angel, bring'st with thee
    A heaven-like Mahomet's paradise ; and though
    Ill spirits walk in white, we easily know
    By this these angels from an evil sprite ;
    Those set our hairs, but these our flesh upright.
    Licence my roving hands, and let them go
    Before, behind, between, above, below.
    O, my America, my Newfoundland,
    My kingdom, safest when with one man mann'd,
    My mine of precious stones, my empery ;
    How am I blest in thus discovering thee !
    To enter in these bonds, is to be free ;
    Then, where my hand is set, my soul shall be.
    Full nakedness ! All joys are due to thee ;
    As souls unbodied, bodies unclothed must be
    To taste whole joys. Gems which you women use
    Are like Atlanta's ball cast in men's views ;
    That, when a fool's eye lighteth on a gem,
    His earthly soul might court that, not them.
    Like pictures, or like books' gay coverings made
    For laymen, are all women thus array'd.
    Themselves are only mystic books, which we
    —Whom their imputed grace will dignify—
    Must see reveal'd. Then, since that I may know,
    As liberally as to thy midwife show
    Thyself ; cast all, yea, this white linen hence ;
    There is no penance due to innocence :
    To teach thee, I am naked first ; why then,
    What needst thou have more covering than a man?


    One of my favourites


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,314 ✭✭✭Talliesin


    I hope this is considered a reasonable cause for returning to such an old thread, but I was reminded of this seventeenth-century ballad by a thread in the Sex & Sexuality forum. It's cruder than most of what we've had so far, but has a certain charm:
    A Pleasant New Ballad; Being a Merry Discourse between a Country Lass and a young Taylor;
    Shewing
    How the Taylor lost his plight and pleasure,
    His yard not being of Standard Measure.
    To a Pleasant New Tune; or, Kester [Chester] Crab.

    In harvest-time I walked
    hard by a corn-close side;
    I hearing people talk,
    I look'd about and spy'd

    A young man and a maid,
    together they did lye;
    When you hear it told,
    you'l laugh full heartily.

    She was as buxsome a lass
    as any in our town;
    She will not let you pass
    but she'l call you to sit down.

    A taylor passing by,
    she hit him on the heele:
    "You are very welcome, Sir,
    to sit you down and feele:

    "What money's in my purse
    at your command shall be,
    If you will go along
    to Marson Wake with me."

    He hearing her say so,
    and seeing her to smile,
    Was charned with her, so
    he sate him down a while.

    And having groped her purse,
    and taken all her money,
    He grop'd again, and mist
    and caught her by the coney.

    "Where am I now?" quoth he,
    "another I have found;
    Its not the same," quoth he,
    for this is tufted round."

    "If it be tufted round," quoth she,
    "there is good reason for't,
    There in such treasure lyes
    will make a taylor sport."

    He hearing her say so,
    being a frolicksome lad,
    Was willing for to know
    more of the fringed bag.

    With that he eagerly
    to feel put forth his hand.
    "Nay, hold, good Sir," said she,
    "go not before you stand:

    "Except you take your yard,
    the depth of it to measure,
    You'l find the purse so deep,
    you'l hardly come to th' treasure."

    He hearing her say so,
    it put him to a stand;
    She seeing him dismaid,
    she took his yard in hand:

    "is this your yard ?" quoth she,
    "is this your taylor's measure?
    It is too short for me,
    it is no Standard-Measure."

    The taylor being abashed,
    she told him that it was
    More fitter for a man,
    than such a penny ass.

    She bids him now be gone,
    since he could make no sport,
    And said, 'thou are too dull
    to enter such a fort."

    Then looking fiercely at him,
    she said, "Thou sneaking fool,
    Go straight away to Vulcan,
    and let him mend thy tool.

    "And tell him that Dame Venus
    at him is almost mad,
    For sending to her school,
    such an unfit lad."

    You taylors that attempt
    fringed bags to measure,
    Be sure your yard be sealed,
    and full Standard Measure.


  • Registered Users Posts: 2,629 ✭✭✭raah!


    The Trout by John Montague

    Flat on the bank I parted
    Rushes to ease my hands
    In the water without a ripple
    And tilt them slowly downstream
    To where he lay, tendril-light,
    In his fluid sensual dream.

    Bodiless lord of creation,
    I hung briefly above him
    Savouring my own absence,
    Senses expanding in the slow
    Motion, the photographic calm
    That grows before action.

    As the curve of my hands
    Swung under his body
    He surged, with visible pleasure.
    I was so preternaturally close
    I could count every stipple
    But still cast no shadow, until

    The two palms crossed in a cage
    Under the lightly pulsing gills.
    Then (entering my own enlarged
    Shape, which rode on the water)
    I gripped. To this day I can
    Taste his terror on my hands.

    whe, whe, whe.


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