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  • 27-01-2009 5:40pm
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    flurby
    Closed Accounts Posts: 53 ✭✭


    Hi all,

    I'm a web/multimedia developer working freelance in Dublin. I've just updated my portfolio and I'm really interested in comments/opinions on how I could improve it's presentation, focus and general effectiveness.

    http://www.john-lynch.org/

    Thanks,

    J.

    PS If anyone hasn't upgraded to IE7, please let me know if my conditionals in the CSS are working. I'm using standalone install of 6, because 7 is installed I can't test them!
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    #2
    pauldiv
    Registered Users Posts: 197 ✭✭pauldiv


    Hi flurby, Just a few thoughts:

    This has potential for sure.
    Nice clean design and the lego concept is good.

    The menu items 'interactive' and 'web' are a bit vague. I had to guess what was behind those links. Could maybe say what they are eg., projects and websites.

    Not sure what the box at the top right is for so I didnt even click it. It looks very unconventional and unintuitive.

    Contact form fields need aligning and would look nice if all same width. (Im using FF3 btw.)

    I think you know that the main focus needs to be on marketing what you can do. I think you should pay more attention to the copy. Its the words that persuade in the end. Your words undersell in my opinion and need more oomph.


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