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thegrove54 · 2009-01-27 21:34:18

is the new book im wrighting where fairy tale hits the modern world and billy the goat trys too nuke it but im a first time wrighter so any tips or pointers would be greatly appreciated peace out evan

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27-01-2009 10:34pm

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is the new book im wrighting where fairy tale hits the modern world and billy the goat trys too nuke it but im a first time wrighter so any tips or pointers would be greatly appreciated

peace out
evan

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#2 27-01-2009 10:51pm
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#3 27-01-2009 11:45pm
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thegrove54 wrote: »

peace out

You end a one sentence post with a tired and over-used phrase. Do you really think you could manage a novel, even if you did learn spelling and punctuation?

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#4 28-01-2009 4:54am
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Surely you could have found something better than the not-inherently-incorrect phrase 'peace out' to bemoan...

I wish him the best of luck in his career as a wrighter.

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#5 28-01-2009 6:16am
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donegalfella wrote: »

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This one especially. Bless all those who sail in her.

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