Story. I'll start you carry on.

DHFrame

Ok. Lets all write a story together. The rules are;

1.You have to wait for a reply before adding more.

2.Post a single '!' to reserve your reply. Edit this post with your reply.

3.You can post as much as you want as long as its not ''twice'' in a row.

4.Max ''ten'' words per post.

Its probably not going to work, but lets give it a try anyway. No harm.

I'll start..

DHFrame

Once upon a time in a land far far away...

Matt Holck

people found it easy to mar stories with explicit deviant sexual acts

busted flush

the end.

Matt Holck

I feel bad
maybe the story could work

DHFrame

Laff out loud!

rediguana

Now that really WAS a short story.

riskydisco

I feel that this story really could have gone somewhere.. even considering the hyper-cliched beginning.

Insect Overlord

I think the cliché probably killed it before it could go anywhere.

riskydisco

You know what? I believe you're right.

imasmeasmecanbe

Hey dead things can still go places................ just takes a bit more effort.

Insect Overlord

imasmeasmecanbe wrote: »

Hey dead things can still go places................ just takes a bit more effort.

Yes, but who is going to make the effort to get things going?
A much stronger opening line is needed, for starters.
Less taking-of-the-p!ss too.

bluejeans_01

i think this would have been good if people weren't so bloody sarcastic! tut..tut.

let's see.... start one of these or something!

The wind blew at her face and tousled her hair, her clothes were damp and uncomfortable, and her back-pack weighed heavily upon her damaged spirit, but she had to keep going and reach......

or
Sean gulped 'oh god, i'm in **** now' he thought, as he kicked his trainer at the fence, he looked back to see if they were still chasing him 'why do i always have to be so stupid and impulsive! Fat Joe is gona.....'

or
Jenny turned back to the gastly mirror that stood before her. She didn't smile.

or
...............something! haha!:)

Deliverance

busted flush wrote: »

the end.

Or is it?

Deliverance

An File wrote: »

Yes, but who is going to make the effort to get things going?
A much stronger opening line is needed, for starters.
Less taking-of-the-p!ss too.

Said the critic with a wry smile, little did she know...

imasmeasmecanbe

that Thomas Harry Edward End, one of the most promising new writers on the scene reserved his full name for formal gatherings.

Bonavox

An File wrote: »

I think the cliché probably killed it before it could go anywhere.

Very True