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mordeith · 25-02-2015 1:43pm

shane9689 wrote: »

Hi all, so heres an LP i made over the summer but never released or mastered
enjoy and feedback is welcome

Link? (can't see one on my phone at any rate)

shane9689 · 25-02-2015 2:35pm

Im an eejit haha,

here it is

https://soundcloud.com/shanemoloneys/sets/my-tracks-demo

eviltimeban · 25-02-2015 2:38pm

shane9689 wrote: »

Im an eejit haha,

here it is

Had a flick through (I'll listen properly later) and it sounds pretty cool. Good variety which is good and nice beats. And hey, I used that "what is underground" vocal sample on a deep house track a while back!

mordeith · 26-02-2015 9:07pm

shane9689 wrote: »

Im an eejit haha,

here it is

https://soundcloud.com/shanemoloneys/sets/my-tracks-demo

Nice work. Good flow to the tracks and a common theme throughout. My favs are Track 2 untitled and Closed Eyes.
Can I ask how you generated the piano in Dark floiw, synth or sampler?

mordeith · 26-02-2015 9:08pm

shane9689 wrote: »

Im an eejit haha,

here it is

https://soundcloud.com/shanemoloneys/sets/my-tracks-demo

Nice work. Good flow to the tracks and a common theme throughout. My favs are Track 2 untitled and Closed Eyes.
Can I ask how you generated the piano in Lost Dreams, synth or sampler?

WasterEx · 28-02-2015 2:26am

Ahhh! After over a year of not being able to finish any tracks, I finally nailed this one in 3 weeks!

Looking forward to hearing what ya think!

https://soundcloud.com/markcremin/surge-original-mix/s-ZJfCp

Thanks

shane9689 · 01-03-2015 12:24am

mordeith wrote: »

Nice work. Good flow to the tracks and a common theme throughout. My favs are Track 2 untitled and Closed Eyes.
Can I ask how you generated the piano in Lost Dreams, synth or sampler?

all using the grand piano that comes with ableton, i believe it uses samples. no way a synth could get such a close sound...in future i hope just to play live instruments for those parts myself

Track 2 seems to get the best response from people, haha its one of my least favourites aswell

shane9689 · 01-03-2015 12:28am

WasterEx wrote: »

Ahhh! After over a year of not being able to finish any tracks, I finally nailed this one in 3 weeks! Looking forward to hearing what ya think!

https://soundcloud.com/markcremin/surge-original-mix/s-ZJfCp

Thanks

Good track, i feel with those builds, something different could happen for the drop, like making the synth sound abit different or something...im abit out of touch with that genre at the moment but its a really well done track, everything is balanced really well.

shane9689 · 01-03-2015 2:29am

heres a track i made ages ago but didnt release because it uses the demo version of sylnth haha
enjoy
https://soundcloud.com/shanemoloneys/space-oddessy-track-demo

WasterEx · 01-03-2015 8:28pm

Awesome feedback dude! Thanks

shane9689 wrote: »

heres a track i made ages ago but didnt release because it uses the demo version of sylnth haha
enjoy
https://soundcloud.com/shanemoloneys/space-oddessy-track-demo

Nice intro, straight to the point. Good selection on the percussion you used, it helps the track out a lot. The bass is really nice! I can't judge low frequencies based off of my monitors through listening really, but the vibrations from the woofers told me; there's either to much low end or the bass is to loud haha. The transition to the break at 1:30 really stood out for me, it's a bit sudden, you could try dropping the kick or percussion out for a few beats to make the transition seem more natural to the listener. Great work on the atmosphere you've created; mysterious euphoric vibes throughout. Solid structure, good stuff man! (Y)

mordeith · 02-03-2015 6:07pm

WasterEx wrote: »

Ahhh! After over a year of not being able to finish any tracks, I finally nailed this one in 3 weeks! Looking forward to hearing what ya think!

https://soundcloud.com/markcremin/surge-original-mix/s-ZJfCp

Thanks

Nice intro and all the overall track sounds nice and tight. That bassline reminds a lot of this

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UOgBFL6bJTY

I think there's a bit of overuse of white noise at time but overall a decent track with good arrangment

mordeith · 02-03-2015 6:12pm

shane9689 wrote: »

heres a track i made ages ago but didnt release because it uses the demo version of sylnth haha
enjoy
https://soundcloud.com/shanemoloneys/space-oddessy-track-demo

Nice progressive vibe here. I like that heavy reverb hit and the vocal sample is cool as well. Main arpeggiation could maybe be varied slightly more. That extra melody at 2.33 caught me off guard a bit as did the dub wobble. In terms of production it sounds pretty tight. Lower frequencies seem ok to me

WasterEx · 03-03-2015 5:08pm

mordeith wrote: »

Nice intro and all the overall track sounds nice and tight. That bassline reminds a lot of this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UOgBFL6bJTY

I think there's a bit of overuse of white noise at time but overall a decent track with good arrangment

That's the track my original inspiration came from for the bassline itself! You've good ears dude. Nice spot on the white noise, sort of just realised that myself now, thank you!

keithkk16 · 03-03-2015 6:14pm

shane9689 wrote: »

heres a track i made ages ago but didnt release because it uses the demo version of sylnth haha
enjoy
https://soundcloud.com/shanemoloneys/space-oddessy-track-demo

The percussion on your track reminded me of this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pe9YKGhe-SU

Overall it's mixed well, would of liked a bit more of build up in the intro, slightly structure the track a bit different maybe. Goes a bit mad at the end and sounds like it go well in a club environment for that genre

keithkk16 · 03-03-2015 6:42pm

WasterEx wrote: »

Ahhh! After over a year of not being able to finish any tracks, I finally nailed this one in 3 weeks! Looking forward to hearing what ya think!

https://soundcloud.com/markcremin/surge-original-mix/s-ZJfCp

Thanks

The genre of the song wouldn't be my thing really, intro put me off a little until the synths came in. It's well mixed and structured very well, nice rises and falls. I quite like the spacey/alien type synth in it. Kick sounds a bit clicky to me, imo I'd cut out some of the high end.

CyanRain · 08-03-2015 7:15pm

This 7 months old now, but I kind of uploaded it and forgot about it. Going for a chill, garagey vibe. Think Disclosure but less appropriate for a club setting. I'd love if someone could listen and give feedback. Cheers.

https://soundcloud.com/resident_wrafter/sleeper

keithkk16 · 08-03-2015 7:50pm

CyanRain wrote: »

This 7 months old now, but I kind of uploaded it and forgot about it. Going for a chill, garagey vibe. Think Disclosure but less appropriate for a club setting. I'd love if someone could listen and give feedback. Cheers.

https://soundcloud.com/resident_wrafter/sleeper

Nice track man. It has a nice sunday morning vibe to it. Only thing that I would criticise would be the kick. Maybe it's me but I don't think it suits the track. It needs to be more louder or needs more of a punch. The kick hit seems a bit short and feels like there's a gate on it knocking off the good stuff.

mordeith · 09-03-2015 1:51pm

CyanRain wrote: »

This 7 months old now, but I kind of uploaded it and forgot about it. Going for a chill, garagey vibe. Think Disclosure but less appropriate for a club setting. I'd love if someone could listen and give feedback. Cheers.

https://soundcloud.com/resident_wrafter/sleeper

Yeah, very nice. Love the pads that come in during the break and nice vocal as well. I agree with Keith regarding the kick. It's just a bit lost in tthe mix. I think the open hat could do with bringing out the higher frequencies a bit more as well.

keithkk16 · 09-03-2015 6:14pm

I decided to upload a 8 track album of some new songs and some older songs from the last couple of years that haven't been available on my Soundcloud before. Everything from chill out to techno. Stream or download and enjoy. Go on sure it's free!:)
https://scoobz1.bandcamp.com/album/momentary

DJ SC · 14-03-2015 4:32pm

new track ive been working on
mixed through headphones so not entirely sure its right
all feedback is good
cheers
https://soundcloud.com/pathogendnb/signal-no-more-pathogen-remix

grateface · 14-03-2015 8:12pm

Hi folks,

My mate Rob is beginning to put up tracks he's produced of late. He doesnt have the post count to stick em up yet.

He'd appreciate any comments.

Romel The Noisemaker - Do It! (Original mix)

I'll shoot up a set he's up in the other thread.

cheers.

mordeith · 15-03-2015 11:07am

DJ SC wrote: »

new track ive been working on
mixed through headphones so not entirely sure its right
all feedback is good
cheers
https://soundcloud.com/pathogendnb/signal-no-more-pathogen-remix

Hey. Sounds pretty good. Bassline a little muddy perhaps but nice strong kick and hats. Snare could maybe be brightened a little. Personally regarding the track overall, it really needs a melody. To me it just kinda sounded like a drum loop.

mordeith · 15-03-2015 11:26am

grateface wrote: »

Hi folks,

My mate Rob is beginning to put up tracks he's produced of late. He doesnt have the post count to stick em up yet.

He'd appreciate any comments.

Romel The Noisemaker - Do It! (Original mix)

I'll shoot up a set he's up in the other thread.

cheers.

I like this. Nice chugging percussion and it sounds pretty well mixed. I think the moaning is overdone a bit though. Also that distorted vocal hit sounds off (timing wise) to me. I think it would be better coming in on the last beat. I like the overall arrangement although maybe the introduction of another synth element might be nice. Just some higher frequency hits or something, nothing too dramatic.

RTN · 16-03-2015 2:27pm

Cheers for the feed back man, much appreciated. I get exactly what your saying. I'll bare it in mind for the next track

RTN · 16-03-2015 2:36pm

DJ SC wrote: »

new track ive been working on
mixed through headphones so not entirely sure its right
all feedback is good
cheers

Cool track, I love drum and bass myself. Maybe some horrible bass stabs or a lush pad could go well with it to. Kick sounds lovely!

SameHorse · 18-03-2015 4:29pm

keithkk16 wrote: »

I decided to upload a 8 track album of some new songs and some older songs from the last couple of years that haven't been available on my Soundcloud before. Everything from chill out to techno. Stream or download and enjoy. Go on sure it's free!:)

sounds good mate... tell me, in PM if you like, how you find bandcamp VS soundcloud.. i use soundcloud myself but thinking about migrating to bandcamp

SameHorse · 18-03-2015 4:30pm

Here's an ambient piece I composed for a shortfilm....

https://soundcloud.com/gr3y_g00/ocular

keithkk16 · 18-03-2015 10:37pm

SameHorse wrote: »

sounds good mate... tell me, in PM if you like, how you find bandcamp VS soundcloud.. i use soundcloud myself but thinking about migrating to bandcamp

Thanks. I usually use soundcloud just for single track uploads but it never works 100% and is full of spam followers and spam messages. The only reason I used bandcamp was it looked more professional and I'm basically using it as a portfolio to send to people, production companies and the like. Atm I would say bandcamp is better, a lot less spam and a lot of stats about your music is free to see were as soundcloud makes you pay to see stats. Bandcamp also gives you more downloads for free.

mordeith · 19-03-2015 2:10am

SameHorse wrote: »

Here's an ambient piece I composed for a shortfilm....

https://soundcloud.com/gr3y_g00/ocular

Nicely atmospheric. More of a soundscape than a typical track I suppose.

SameHorse · 19-03-2015 8:40pm

keithkk16 wrote: »

Thanks. I usually use soundcloud just for single track uploads but it never works 100% and is full of spam followers and spam messages. The only reason I used bandcamp was it looked more professional and I'm basically using it as a portfolio to send to people, production companies and the like. Atm I would say bandcamp is better, a lot less spam and a lot of stats about your music is free to see were as soundcloud makes you pay to see stats. Bandcamp also gives you more downloads for free.

thanks for that feedback. yes i always have the impression with soundcloud that I can just throw a track up. whereas with bandcamp it has a vibe of...finished product about it. you're bang on about the spam followers etc. on the other hand i find soundcloud has been good for long-form mixes and stuff like that.

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