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jtsuited

http://soundcloud.com/bawdcaster/perpetual-refrain-demo

DarkJager

My latest one, something quite different from what I usually do. Any suggestions on what genre this would fall under (I'm leaning towards Progressive Trance) are much appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/watch-your-step-320-kb

dasdog

Nice to have some time off to do a song. Sun Ra and his Archestra. Shame about the truth of friends in the song.

http://soundcloud.com/dasdog/iceskating

SinewaveSurfer

jtsuited wrote: »

http://soundcloud.com/bawdcaster/perpetual-refrain-demo

Infectious groove.

A+

DarkJager

Another new one from me. This one was laying around for a while and just finished this afternoon. A trancey, tripped vibe to it. Any feedback is much appreciated:

http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/drive-320

keithkk16

New track from me called "Movement" under the new artist name "Koffi" track shall be getting released in April or May. http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/koffi-movement

seannash

Okay so i gave Jude FC's track another crack

My ears are pretty shot so id appreciate comments on the mixdown,the arrangment isnt going to change at this point and im happy with how it progresses

Nothing too cryptic if possible,more whats wrong with the mix if you would be so kind :P

http://soundcloud.com/seannash/jude

DarkJager

seannash wrote: »

Okay so i gave Jude FC's track another crack

My ears are pretty shot so id appreciate comments on the mixdown,the arrangment isnt going to change at this point and im happy with how it progresses

Nothing too cryptic if possible,more whats wrong with the mix if you would be so kind :P

http://soundcloud.com/seannash/jude

Really enjoyed listening to that man, very nice summer vibe to it. That mini breakdown adds a lovely flavor to it.

seannash

DarkJager wrote: »

Really enjoyed listening to that man, very nice summer vibe to it. That mini breakdown adds a lovely flavor to it.

Thanks man.
Glad your liking it
Im between two minds with this one to be honest,I like it but i can see how people wouldnt.
Good thing Steve turned in a savage version:)

final version http://soundcloud.com/seannash/j

Decitronic

A fairly recent dubstep track that I produced in Cubase:

http://soundcloud.com/decitronic/decitronic-rainforest

Splinters

Heres a track from a new electro/rock band Im putting together. Full live band already assembled but Id quite like to get some vocals on this, just dont really know anyone suitable. All opinions, constructive criticism etc welcome, and if you happened to know a singer who might be into this kind of stuff feel free to let me know

http://soundcloud.com/stationsband/stations-caprice

lima

Hi there,

Here's a work in progress I made in Logic 9, would love some feedback!

It's progressive Trance inspired my Michael Cassette and Pryda:

http://soundcloud.com/lamai/winter

lima

Splinters wrote: »

Heres a track from a new electro/rock band Im putting together. Full live band already assembled but Id quite like to get some vocals on this, just dont really know anyone suitable. All opinions, constructive criticism etc welcome, and if you happened to know a singer who might be into this kind of stuff feel free to let me know

http://soundcloud.com/stationsband/stations-caprice

this is fecking rockin'!!

well done

Chloroplast

Splinters wrote: »

Heres a track from a new electro/rock band Im putting together. Full live band already assembled but Id quite like to get some vocals on this, just dont really know anyone suitable. All opinions, constructive criticism etc welcome, and if you happened to know a singer who might be into this kind of stuff feel free to let me know

http://soundcloud.com/stationsband/stations-caprice

Thats a very well put together track, well done.

electrogrimey

Working on this at the moment, bit of a juke type thing. Still in early stages, so all suggestions welcome.

http://www22.zippyshare.com/v/81835058/file.html

SteveDon

electrogrimey wrote: »

Working on this at the moment, bit of a juke type thing. Still in early stages, so all suggestions welcome.

http://www22.zippyshare.com/v/81835058/file.html

The sample at the start, the one that sounds like pacific state needs more decay at the end of it, its cut wrong. That noise thing that comes in at around 30 seconds is kinda annoying.

Vocal is okay, but repetitive, wheres the efx automation.

When all those kicks come in at around 1.30 its too much, have some of them at different velocities maybe, or put in different kickdrums.

The structure seems a bit all over the place aswell.

Overall id say go back to the drawing board here with the elements you have and try to develop those elements using efx and try to give the track a better structure, also id consider chaning the drums completely.

Keep it up!

krd

electrogrimey wrote: »

Working on this at the moment, bit of a juke type thing. Still in early stages, so all suggestions welcome.

http://www22.zippyshare.com/v/81835058/file.html

I think it sounds really good. You might have overused the rain beads though or maybe you haven't - I'd like to hear the thing with a solid house 4/4 through it. You could tighten it up a bit - but some parts sound really good. The arrangement makes sense - but sometimes it doesn't. Some bits should be much longer.

iamstop

New Disco House kinda track:

http://soundcloud.com/norman-breaks/stop-start

Hope you like.

SteveDon

iamstop wrote: »

New Disco House kinda track:

http://soundcloud.com/norman-breaks/stop-start

Hope you like.

Just listened to your track. The two main synth lines, arent in the same key as eachother, im sorry but it makes it sound really really bad. Also the sounds themselves are very cheesy/tinny. What did you use to make this?

Also consider putting more cymbals in it could defo do with an open hi hat and a ride to get it a fuller sound.

SteveDon

Ive been spending the last week trying to put this tune together. I cant seem to get the mix quite right though and my ears are now blind to the errors cause ive listened to it so much.

Help me out

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/stephen-donaldson-travel-rough

Android 666

SteveDon wrote: »

Ive been spending the last week trying to put this tune together. I cant seem to get the mix quite right though and my ears are now blind to the errors cause ive listened to it so much.

Help me out

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/stephen-donaldson-travel-rough

Okay, I think the saxophone part is sitting too low in the mix. Also, it seems like it would work better if it was introduced in a breakdown by itself. Another problem I think is that the sax line feels overtly complex as a hook and not given enough time before you start soloing with it.

This is a masterclass (for me) in saxophone being used in a dance track:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ep6QiLXHLy0

Hope this helps and thanks for all the help over the last couple of weeks. Hope the EP is doing well!

SteveDon

Android 666 wrote: »

Okay, I think the saxophone part is sitting too low in the mix. Also, it seems like it would work better if it was introduced in a breakdown by itself. Another problem I think is that the sax line feels overtly complex as a hook and not given enough time before you start soloing with it.

This is a masterclass (for me) in saxophone being used in a dance track:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ep6QiLXHLy0

Hope this helps and thanks for all the help over the last couple of weeks. Hope the EP is doing well!

Cheers man, its a trumpet actually but i definitely can see were you are coming from.

I might try to put little bits of the trumpet in from the start and build it up to the main hook.

Did it sound good otherwise? (Would it get you dancing?)

red dave

made me bop my head alright.

had another listen there and the impacts are a bit muted. i'd say it's probably down to preference with them things though. i normally have them higher but that could just be the way i do it etc. (no right or wrong with that )

still love it

iamstop

SteveDon wrote: »

Also consider putting more cymbals in it could defo do with an open hi hat and a ride to get it a fuller sound.

Cheers for the listen dude. Was just something I lashed together today so I'll take the criticism. I hear you on the tinnyness/cheesyness and agree a few cymbals and rides could add a bit more to it. Cheers again.

SteveDon

red dave wrote: »

made me bop my head alright.

had another listen there and the impacts are a bit muted. i'd say it's probably down to preference with them things though. i normally have them higher but that could just be the way i do it etc. (no right or wrong with that )

still love it

Sound dave glad you like it, will hopefully get a better mix done this week!

pearsquasher

http://soundcloud.com/keyfumbler/keyfumbler-showcase-mix

MAde with VAz, fruityloops, and hammerhead form a few years back!

jtsuited

fcukin hell.....hammerhead!!!!
i remember i had a dodgy copy of that when i was 13. hours of fun.

krd

iamstop wrote: »

New Disco House kinda track:

http://soundcloud.com/norman-breaks/stop-start

Hope you like.

Where is it?

I didn't get a chance to hear it. My laptop is in the shop. I'm only getting on the internet in fits and bursts.

BaZmO*

SteveDon wrote: »

Ive been spending the last week trying to put this tune together. I cant seem to get the mix quite right though and my ears are now blind to the errors cause ive listened to it so much.

Help me out

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/stephen-donaldson-travel-rough

I really like your sound Steve, some really great tracks.

As for this track in particular, some nice ideas but I just feel it's missing something but can't quite put my finger on it. Possibly missing some bass. I know it's heavy on the kick sound, but maybe giving it some bass notes will give it an added umph. But that may be just my preference.

ed warren

http://soundcloud.com/ed-warren/ed-warren-state-of-mind
thanks for listening any feedback more than welcome