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DarkJager

Android 666 wrote: »

Latest demo up. Another dubstep one. Feedback always appreciated:

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/other-lifetimes

Very nice track bud, its got a really nice trippy ambience to it. Great job

DarkJager

This is my latest track, went back to a trance vibe for this one. Its called Pandemic and any feedback is much appreciated

http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/pandemic

Android 666

DarkJager wrote: »

Very nice track bud, its got a really nice trippy ambience to it. Great job

Cheers for listening DJ. Had a listen to your tune and there's some really cool stuff happening there. I think you should change the piano for something a bit more rhytmic like a xylophone or something. Besides that it sounds great.

seannash

DarkJager wrote: »

This is my latest track, went back to a trance vibe for this one. Its called Pandemic and any feedback is much appreciated

http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/pandemic

Theres somthing not quite right about the low octave bassy note that plays with the piano,doesnt sound right

Android 666

Here's the other one I finished at the weekend:

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/knowing-you

SteveDon

Android 666 wrote: »

Here's the other one I finished at the weekend:

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/knowing-you

Your songs are getting better and better with every one. Really like the bass in this one. Keep it up.

SteveDon

Taking a break for a while from making house and techno.

Trying to come up with something that has a little more emotion to convey that just your average dancefloor track.

This is the first track ive finished for this project.

The Clock:

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-clock

Would appreciate some thoughts as always!

Android 666

SteveDon wrote: »

Taking a break for a while from making house and techno.

Trying to come up with something that has a little more emotion to convey that just your average dancefloor track.

This is the first track ive finished for this project.

The Clock:

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-clock

Would appreciate some thoughts as always!

Some nice stuff going on here Steve, to me though it feels that some of the elements are a bit too in the background. It would be nice to hear the synth a the beginning a bit louder throughout the whole thing. And just a suggestion but I think a trickling rain sample with be much suited to the track as background noise than the vinyl sample.

SteveDon

Android 666 wrote: »

Some nice stuff going on here Steve, to me though it feels that some of the elements are a bit too in the background. It would be nice to hear the synth a the beginning a bit louder throughout the whole thing. And just a suggestion but I think a trickling rain sample with be much suited to the track as background noise than the vinyl sample.

Cheers for listening, i get what you mean. I was trying to keep it very subtle but i think i could possibly bring the higher synths out more.

SteveDon

Android 666 wrote: »

Some nice stuff going on here Steve, to me though it feels that some of the elements are a bit too in the background. It would be nice to hear the synth a the beginning a bit louder throughout the whole thing. And just a suggestion but I think a trickling rain sample with be much suited to the track as background noise than the vinyl sample.

Did a little tinkering with the levels, still keeping it subtle enough.

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-clock

Dont have a rain effect. Im pretty happy with the background tho, its just ambience from a cafe in holland.

Android 666

SteveDon wrote: »

Did a little tinkering with the levels, still keeping it subtle enough.

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-clock

Dont have a rain effect. Im pretty happy with the background tho, its just ambience from a cafe in holland.

Yeah that sounds way better. Really nice track.

SteveDon

Android 666 wrote: »

Yeah that sounds way better. Really nice track.

Cheers man, thanks for the input, does sound much better now.

Splinters

Soundcloud hasnt been too kind to the last few tracks I tried uploading so Ill just a link to a rar'ed mp3 instead. Just finished this one this morning. Still a bit I wanna tweak with the mix but Im really liking how its shaping up. Quite a strong Dubstep vibe going on, nice and dirty

http://www.becomingproductions.net/2.rar

dasdog

It's a bit scrappy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAsmx-128VU

krd

dasdog wrote: »

It's a bit scrappy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAsmx-128VU

Seriously....f'ing cool.

Especially, liked how you reversed that writing to make it look like Russian.

Dasdog - take five chips of solid Nitrogen frozen chips of gold - and place those chips in your bank account...............You have earned them

Thank you for defending the planet

More!!

SteveDon

dasdog wrote: »

It's a bit scrappy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAsmx-128VU

this is deadly, really like it, do you have any more tunes like this?

keithkk16

New track i worked on over the weekend.
Still needs a bit of work done to it.
Has a Tech House/Prog House vibe to it .
Opinions would be greatly appreciated
http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/koffi-castle-of-noise

lazyatom

posted a new track, Reactor No 2, up on Soundcloud if anyone wants to have a listen. probably the most effort i've ever put into a track in some mad attempt to create a track that is less like my normal stuff, and more... Berghain-ish, and failing so totally and utterly.

http://soundcloud.com/lustbader/reactor-no-2-siren-song-mix

another ambient discordant intro and layers and layers of sounds leading up to the inevitable last third crescendo i have been desperately trying to avoid.

spent like, f•cking AAAAAAAGES tweaking every sound to get stuff jump out or hide down in the mix, and freaking days structuring the bloody thing.

kinda proud of it but utterly hate it too.

so, uh, yeah... have a listen if you want to waste, like, fifteen minutes of your life. i mean, fifteen minutes??? wtf was i thinking? i can't seem to get any tune of mine in under 8 mins, let alone make a radio friendly choon.

any feedback would be welcome. even a genre placement would help...

Carl Sagan

SteveDon wrote: »

Did a little tinkering with the levels, still keeping it subtle enough.

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-clock

Dont have a rain effect. Im pretty happy with the background tho, its just ambience from a cafe in holland.

Loved it

keithkk16

Another track I just finished up has a deep house/prog house feel to it.
http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/robert-babicz-remote-kiss

Carl Sagan

keithkk16 wrote: »

Another track I just finished up has a deep house/prog house feel to it.
http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/robert-babicz-remote-kiss

Thought it was great. Nice beat and melody. Love the break too.

seannash

Carl Sagan wrote: »

Thought it was great. Nice beat and melody. Love the break too.

agree,nice track

AfroSonic

Howdy... first track up - http://soundcloud.com/afrosonic/oscillate

Chillout type feel to it. Not much post production work done to it so feedback and suggestions welcome.

Cheers.

keithkk16

Carl Sagan wrote: »

Thought it was great. Nice beat and melody. Love the break too.

seannash wrote: »

agree,nice track

Cheers lads thanks for the feedback.

Exoskeleton

My first track, doesn't really have a proper outro and I need to work on a proper intro, but everything else I'm happy with. Let's see what anyone else has to say. It's drum and bass but influenced by harder genres like UK garage and dubstep.
http://soundcloud.com/exoskeleton/exoskeleton-grit

Android 666

seannash wrote: »

agree,nice track

Yeah. Really enjoyed that. Nice work.

Android 666

lazyatom wrote: »

posted a new track, Reactor No 2, up on Soundcloud if anyone wants to have a listen. probably the most effort i've ever put into a track in some mad attempt to create a track that is less like my normal stuff, and more... Berghain-ish, and failing so totally and utterly.

http://soundcloud.com/lustbader/reactor-no-2-siren-song-mix

another ambient discordant intro and layers and layers of sounds leading up to the inevitable last third crescendo i have been desperately trying to avoid.

spent like, f•cking AAAAAAAGES tweaking every sound to get stuff jump out or hide down in the mix, and freaking days structuring the bloody thing.

kinda proud of it but utterly hate it too.

so, uh, yeah... have a listen if you want to waste, like, fifteen minutes of your life. i mean, fifteen minutes??? wtf was i thinking? i can't seem to get any tune of mine in under 8 mins, let alone make a radio friendly choon.

any feedback would be welcome. even a genre placement would help...

I really enjoyed this lazy - it's a real journey track. I think it would really help if you gave the drums a bit more depth, make them more cavernous in places but it's a cool track, love the siren and alarm effects.

Android 666

AfroSonic wrote: »

Howdy... first track up - http://soundcloud.com/afrosonic/oscillate

Chillout type feel to it. Not much post production work done to it so feedback and suggestions welcome.

Cheers.

I think it's too fast for a chillout piece so I'd either bring down the bpm to about 80-90 or bring it up slightly and make the drums a bit heavier and louder and make more of a housey track.

Android 666

Okay, two new tracks I've been working on. One's kind of a chilled out garage thing:

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/bliss-is-adrift

And the other is more of a house number:

http://soundcloud.com/android-78/swimming-lesson

Feedback as always is appreciated.

seannash

Android 666 wrote: »

http://soundcloud.com/android-78/swimming-lesson

Feedback as always is appreciated.

Think just throwing in a more prominent snare here and there might help everything