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AdsKen

Hey chaps, had this one on my hard drive for ages then ended up finishing it the other day, but also started this new one today and got that done too so if you have a spare minute take a listen!

http://soundcloud.com/adamkendellen/sets/the-worx/

any feedback appreciated as always

cheers

AdsKen

Plumpynutt wrote: »

My 1st effort, myself and a mate made this. tis but our 1st track, so go easy:p


http://soundcloud.com/dagda_dub/aurora

I'm digging this, although i would have liked some more in the first 1.30 or so. I think it's very minimal which is what i enjoy about the track, might be a little bit long and some might think it gets repetitive but pretty good work for a first track dude.

Plumpynutt

AdsKen wrote: »

I'm digging this, although i would have liked some more in the first 1.30 or so. I think it's very minimal which is what i enjoy about the track, might be a little bit long and some might think it gets repetitive but pretty good work for a first track dude.

nice one man, appreciate the feedback. might shorten it indeed. cheers:D

krd

Plumpynutt wrote: »

nice one man, appreciate the feedback. might shorten it indeed. cheers:D

I don't think the problem is the length.

You could make your drums a little more interesting by having at least slight variations from bar to bar - little shuffles, small runs, reversed delays on hits, ghost notes on the kicks and thangs - to keep it interesting.

Same with other parts - that kind of track would benefit from slight differences in each element, so they don't sound absolutely repetitive.

You could do with some cymbal like events - at places like 2.48. They don't have to be symbols.

Dramatik

Just finished up workin' on a new track, I would be grateful if you could take a listen and give me some feedback on it. There's so some really great tracks in this thread, I must check it more often. Anyway here's the track:

http://soundcloud.com/payter/payter-future-funk

Hiska

Hey everyone i'm new here, the name's Hiska. I make electronic music in varying styles, hope you like it!

http://soundcloud.com/hiska

splitrmx

http://soundcloud.com/splitradix/splitradix-down-the-derries

M O N T O

whatsup guys,

Posted a new track yesterday that has been featured on a compilation

It's a remix of Nas - The world is yours, the whole compilation is hip hop tracks remixed to be more suited to electronic music.

Anyway have a listen, link in the description on how to download the compilation for free.:D

Android 666

Two I worked on over the last couple of weeks:

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/the-headlines-2007-2011-demo

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/pyjama-girl-contemplates

Kieran Green

I was messing around and put a track together.. but im not too sure on what the genre is. im thinking its progressive house though.
http://soundcloud.com/kieran-green/kieran-green-ice-cold

Android 666

Kieran Green wrote: »

I was messing around and put a track together.. but im not too sure on what the genre is. im thinking its progressive house though.
http://soundcloud.com/kieran-green/kieran-green-ice-cold

It's like two different songs - the parts at the beginning and end that are more techno I like and could be developed into something more interesting, the trancey part in the middle sounds a bit generic and I wouldn't be that interesting to me. The hats that come in aound the 30 second mark sound kind of out of time or something, they sound a bit strange to my ears.

krd

Kieran Green wrote: »

I was messing around and put a track together.. but im not too sure on what the genre is. im thinking its progressive house though.
http://soundcloud.com/kieran-green/kieran-green-ice-cold

It's not really two tracks - it's nearly like two tracks

It's got one of those really long outros - that seem to go on foreva - which is not always a bad thing. The outro does actually sound like a drop into another track. I like the outro - it has that hypnotic feel to it.

lazyatom

Sky King wrote: »

Synthey 80's madness with a chunkadelicious beat.

Before any of you go "BLAH BLAH YOUTUBE:mad:" , please watch the vid. I think it's amusing.

Anyway i value the opinions of anyone who wants to give me one or three.

I like this style of music and basically I want to see if I can pull it off.

Cheers

Brilliant beats. Good solid sound. I like the track a lot.

lazyatom

krd wrote: »

Rambling kind of Ambient Electronica.

http://soundcloud.com/meltfunction/noobian-prince-cold-fusion

That's got a lot of potential there! Nice atmosphere throughout, but as Stephen points out on Soundcloud, there's a lot that needs to be done to lift it.

I think it'd make an interesting project for folks to remix if you were up for it?

lazyatom

AdsKen wrote: »

Hey chaps, had this one on my hard drive for ages then ended up finishing it the other day, but also started this new one today and got that done too so if you have a spare minute take a listen!

http://soundcloud.com/adamkendellen/sets/the-worx/

any feedback appreciated as always

cheers

That Pt 2 track is top class work. I'd bump up the mix a little but the whole thing is nicely restrained. The introduction of the bucket/bell sound is sweet.

red dave

Dramatik wrote: »

Just finished up workin' on a new track, I would be grateful if you could take a listen and give me some feedback on it. There's so some really great tracks in this thread, I must check it more often. Anyway here's the track:

http://soundcloud.com/payter/payter-future-funk

great track there man, was a nice listen

DarkJager

This is my latest, a chill out track called Under The Influence. Just started out as playin around, but grew in to a kind of stoned laid back track. Any feedback is much appreciated

http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/under-the-influence-wip

M O N T O

just realised i never posted a link in my previous post! Apologies!

http://snd.sc/qNKLdB

krd

lazyatom wrote: »

That's got a lot of potential there! Nice atmosphere throughout, but as Stephen points out on Soundcloud, there's a lot that needs to be done to lift it.

I think it'd make an interesting project for folks to remix if you were up for it?

I'm having a terrible problem getting down to completing tracks. I'm having a terrible problem completing this statement.

I need some kind of quick fire project work to get doing some stuff to speed again.

I think I might be too embarrassed to hand over that version of the stems.

Kieran Green

http://soundcloud.com/kieran-green/kieran-green-adrenaline
just put this together.. let me know how you think this track could be improved.. maybe the outro is too long?

krd

Kieran Green wrote: »

http://soundcloud.com/kieran-green/kieran-green-adrenaline
just put this together.. let me know how you think this track could be improved.. maybe the outro is too long?

It doesn't get good til the breakdown. The outro is fine


There may be another problem - something I and everyone has been doing. Maxing the sound - empty boominess

Plumpynutt

our latest effort, not really sure what genre you would classify it as, but its at 140bpm.

feedback is appreciated, see what you think:)


http://soundcloud.com/dagda_dub/mr-nice

whiterob81

Plumpynutt wrote: »

our latest effort, not really sure what genre you would classify it as, but its at 140bpm.

feedback is appreciated, see what you think:)


http://soundcloud.com/dagda_dub/mr-nice

I like it. I like the beats that you're using, it has a real northern soul feel to it. I also like the high pitched orchestral sample going through it. Although I have to say there's something about the bass that's kind of bugging me, it's like it's not quite fitting in time wise, that it needs a wee bit of quantization. Is there some sort of delay on it?

keithkk16

Alright lads here's a preview of a new electro house track i'm working on at the minute. Probably not many people's cup of music on here but all the same let
me know what ya think, all feedback welcome.
http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/koffi-de-lave

SteveDon

New techno clip

tried to keep this as simple as possible

interested to your thoughts as always

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/hekyll-tokyo-nights-clip

SteveDon

Heres another one i did today

limited myself to six hours again, dunno if thats a good or a bad thing

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/hekyll-clowning-around-demo

Android 666

SteveDon wrote: »

Heres another one i did today

limited myself to six hours again, dunno if thats a good or a bad thing

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/hekyll-clowning-around-demo

I really liked the first one Tokyo Nights, really nice groove but this one felt a bit too bouncy or something. The first one was great though

DJ SC

http://soundcloud.com/marlok

SteveDon

Android 666 wrote: »

I really liked the first one Tokyo Nights, really nice groove but this one felt a bit too bouncy or something. The first one was great though

Cheers for listening! Think the one i did yesterday was a bit rushed, will probably take it down and rework it a bit.

SteveDon

Been trying to make a track like this for years.

just kinda happened by accident today

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/heykll-feudal-age-demo-mix