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M O N T O

http://soundcloud.com/montomakesmusic/sckrpnch-downloadable-on


New track I've made, feedback & criticism welcome of course!

mordeith

http://soundcloud.com/subbed/vagaries-of-life
Kind of a bouncy house track I put togther with my sister providing the vocals. Only recorded on her iPhone so the quality isn't great. Must say it's pretty tricky mixing vocals. Anyhoo see what y'all think.

krd

mordeith wrote: »

http://soundcloud.com/subbed/vagaries-of-life
Kind of a bouncy house track I put togther with my sister providing the vocals. Only recorded on her iPhone so the quality isn't great.

Kind of a bouncy house track I put togther with my sister providing the vocals.

She has really interest voice with some real soul in there.

Only recorded on her iPhone so the quality isn't great.

No... Negro...You've used Ghetto initiative. Do not wait for the car stereo to come to you, use the tools at your disposal make the car stereo come to you.

Must say it's pretty tricky mixing vocals. Anyhoo see what y'all think.

I don't it's a case of a problem mixing the vocals wrong. You just too much room to everything else. If you have other things competing in the same range - something is going to win out. You should have had a break down, with not much more than her voice. .......And I bet you got that drum sample from a hardcore sample CD.

I think you strip it back to the bounce and voice.. and work it up from there

She has a good voice. If I was back in the habit of doing tracks quickly, I'd really love to remix that. I'd remix your sistas ass negro.

mordeith

krd wrote: »

I'd remix your sistas ass negro.

lol, I'll let her boyfriend know!

Thanks for the feedback. The kick is just some genric sample that I think I put too much compression on.

emcdee

Just recently started producing electronic music, would really appreciate some feedback. Any pointers as to where I am going wrong, ways to improve or what every you feel like saying! There is Dubstep, Drum & Bass and also some Minimal
House there so feel free to have a look.

http://soundcloud.com/laion-studio

dasdog

Promised myself I'd do a tune while I had some time off. Troubles 2.0 on the way, watch out NI.

http://soundcloud.com/dasdog/bricks-7

krd

dasdog wrote: »

Promised myself I'd do a tune while I had some time off. Troubles 2.0 on the way, watch out NI.

http://soundcloud.com/dasdog/bricks-7

My neighbour, upstairs, doesn't like it......I think he thinks it's a little too loud. Aw fcuk it .....I think he's coming down to have a word with me, about your loud music.

krd

http://soundcloud.com/krdnoobian/the-lost-tapes-noobian-120-bpm

Experimental Progressive house

keithkk16

I wouldn't think this would be many peoples cup of music on here, but then again I could be wrong anyway, Just a little mess about session I had during the week trying to make some funk/disco style stuff. Let me know what ya think
http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/scoob-disco-meat

krd

keithkk16 wrote: »

I wouldn't think this would be many peoples cup of music on here, but then again I could be wrong anyway, Just a little mess about session I had during the week trying to make some funk/disco style stuff. Let me know what ya think
http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/scoob-disco-meat

I love the samples.........What are they?

keithkk16

Vocal samples ? mostly from this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IaNzrXAUHBk but had a few other samples laying about, cant remember where I got them now though, then just messed about with the pitch and added just a few effects on top.

whiterob81

emcdee wrote: »

Just recently started producing electronic music, would really appreciate some feedback. Any pointers as to where I am going wrong, ways to improve or what every you feel like saying! There is Dubstep, Drum & Bass and also some Minimal
House there so feel free to have a look.

http://soundcloud.com/laion-studio

had a listen there, it sounds really good. I really like that Free Your Soul track, it's very chilled out.
The only criticism I'd have is that I sometimes think ye over do the wobble a wee bit on some of the dubstep tunes, especially on Time to Get Grimey.

whiterob81

How's it going? Here's something I've been tinkering about with. Any and all feedback is welcome.

http://soundcloud.com/robthetrustysteed/whiterob-is-on-a-new-year

mordeith

whiterob81 wrote: »

How's it going? Here's something I've been tinkering about with. Any and all feedback is welcome.

http://soundcloud.com/robthetrustysteed/whiterob-is-on-a-new-year

I really like the melodic elements in this and the intro is great. I think the kick and snare are too weak though and the bassline could do with being more aggressive as well. I have to say that kick note that's played early makes it sound like the track is skipping! Maybe that's just me though
I like the 'aah' sound at the breakdown as well

whiterob81

mordeith wrote: »

I really like the melodic elements in this and the intro is great. I think the kick and snare are too weak though and the bassline could do with being more aggressive as well. I have to say that kick note that's played early makes it sound like the track is skipping! Maybe that's just me though
I like the 'aah' sound at the breakdown as well

thanks for listening. I'll check out the kick again and see if i can fix that problem you're talking about.
and look at puttin in filthier bass

krd

whiterob81 wrote: »

How's it going? Here's something I've been tinkering about with. Any and all feedback is welcome.

http://soundcloud.com/robthetrustysteed/whiterob-is-on-a-new-year

I think you have the full track there.

The percussion could do with some more "cosmic knowledge". It's a little too ridged. Some ghost kicks, a little more bit of dynamics on the hi's. dnb should sound like a drum machine that thinks it's in jazz band. A good jazz - not just people hitting random notes thinking it's jazz.

Listen back to it, after maybe a beer, and hear what's missing in the percussion.

whiterob81

thanks for the feedback. I think I know what you're getting at in that it needs to be jazzier and a bit more free flowing.

I'll get meself a slab of cans and have another go at it over it the weekend

useded

http://soundcloud.com/young-bee/no-one-in-mind-hanged-man

Work in progress. Remix of this tune:

http://soundcloud.com/thehangedman/no-one-in-mind

Pretty different/out there. Still yet to come up with a proper beat, but throwing around few ideas.

graham_k

http://soundcloud.com/grahamkav/sunset-del-mar-preview

My theme to the sunset vibe at Cafe Del Mar, the place has a great atmosphere at sundown And I think its quite fitting! Still in development, but it's one of my fave tracks I've made.

emcdee

whiterob81 wrote: »

had a listen there, it sounds really good. I really like that Free Your Soul track, it's very chilled out.
The only criticism I'd have is that I sometimes think ye over do the wobble a wee bit on some of the dubstep tunes, especially on Time to Get Grimey.

Thanks very much! I see what you mean on the wobble being a bit too much, sure still have a lot to learn and feedback certainly helps!
Jut had a listen to some of the stuff on your soundcloud! Some great tracks!

whiterob81

Thanks man, the feedback's always appreciated

Be like Nutella

http://soundcloud.com/listothis/funk-your-enemy

Riff from Rage against the Machine and some James Brown and other ****
bomp bomp !

convoymusic

hey guys here is my newest track, have a listen thanks
http://soundcloud.com/cmtracks/convoy-we-are-all-pirates

krd

http://soundcloud.com/krdnoobian/volatile-proton-noobian


Sound cloud chewed up me MP3 a little - there's some burning that's not on the original MP3

Here's a second version, where I did more compression before submitting it too souncloud.
http://soundcloud.com/krdnoobian/volatile-proton-noobian-1

It's still has some of the artefacting and the dynamics I wanted are gone. Soundcloud must assume that everyone wants their tracks banging.

Android 666

The latest one I've been working on…

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/614-unmastered

krd

Android 666 wrote: »

The latest one I've been working on…

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/614-unmastered

That woosh noise is really great - I think you over used it though. In the earlier parts of the track I don't think you need to repeat it.


How did you do it?........The woosh noise - it's actually really surprising?


In the mix, there's a lot of muddiness in the mids, and there isn't much in the highs. If you're using stereo speakers, or a stereo, try to make sure the system isn't sweetening the mix. I'm no one to talk.

Some nice Kraftwerky melodies going on in there.

Android 666

krd wrote: »

That woosh noise is really great - I think you over used it though. In the earlier parts of the track I don't think you need to repeat it.


How did you do it?........The woosh noise - it's actually really surprising?

It's just a small sweep sample pitched and eq.

krd wrote: »

In the mix, there's a lot of muddiness in the mids, and there isn't much in the highs. If you're using stereo speakers, or a stereo, try to make sure the system isn't sweetening the mix. I'm no one to talk.

Some nice Kraftwerky melodies going on in there.

Cheers krd, I'll have another go at sorting out the mids and see what I can do about bringing up the highs. Thanks for the feedback

column

I did this before Christmas - in Reason 4

http://soundcloud.com/amber-wax/frozen-dreams

let me know what you think

Stab*City

A snippet of a track I'm at:

http://soundcloud.com/carlitobriganti/carlito-briganti-out-of-focus

VinylJunkie

My first finished attempt at making my own tune. All feedback welcome.

http://soundcloud.com/seanc/seeping-out-the-cracks-v3

Cheers