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  • Registered Users Posts: 543 ✭✭✭WasterEx


    Almost finished this track, the one that previously had vocals on it.
    Made some new artwork. I think it's better than the artwork I had before, I hope.



    What do ye think? If you have good monitors please let me know if anything is sounding 'unfit'. I'm gonna have to invest in a decent set soon.

    Thanks :)


  • Registered Users Posts: 543 ✭✭✭WasterEx


    elseanino wrote: »
    Hi, just made this track yesterday

    http://soundcloud.com/elseanino/iceberg

    any feedback welcome,

    cheers

    Like this, nice melody too, I left you a comment on Soundcloud earlier.
    I think a few interesting sound FX towards the end of the track would have done good as it goes on for a bit.


  • Registered Users Posts: 5,278 ✭✭✭mordeith


    WasterEx wrote: »
    Almost finished this track, the one that previously had vocals on it.
    Made some new artwork. I think it's better than the artwork I had before, I hope.



    What do ye think? If you have good monitors please let me know if anything is sounding 'unfit'. I'm gonna have to invest in a decent set soon.

    Thanks :)

    That's pretty ncie man. I'm not a huge fan of the main synth sound but it does sound better when the bass plays. One thing I think you do though is keep the bass line going and change it up a little to give the track that extra funk. At the moment you have three notes that make up the bass followed y two hits that sound like and elastic or something (sorry, can't describe it any better :rolleyes:) and I think they weaken the overall sound of the track a bit


  • Registered Users Posts: 543 ✭✭✭WasterEx


    mordeith wrote: »
    That's pretty ncie man. I'm not a huge fan of the main synth sound but it does sound better when the bass plays. One thing I think you do though is keep the bass line going and change it up a little to give the track that extra funk. At the moment you have three notes that make up the bass followed y two hits that sound like and elastic or something (sorry, can't describe it any better :rolleyes:) and I think they weaken the overall sound of the track a bit

    So do you think I should have those 'elastic' sounds removed from the track? As for the bass, the notes do change but I guess I'll make it sound more visible. Have to use the 'midi pitch control' to adjust the bass so its a bit of a nightmare.
    Thanks man! :D


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 7,960 ✭✭✭DarkJager


    Put this up a while ago and have been tweaking it a bit since. This is version 2 of the track, some elements changed and a small bit of eq'ing done. Quality isn't the best but any feedback is appreciated as it's an ongoing work.

    http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/u4ea-no-sleep-v2-wip


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  • Registered Users Posts: 543 ✭✭✭WasterEx


    DarkJager wrote: »
    Put this up a while ago and have been tweaking it a bit since. This is version 2 of the track, some elements changed and a small bit of eq'ing done. Quality isn't the best but any feedback is appreciated as it's an ongoing work.

    http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/u4ea-no-sleep-v2-wip

    Hey man, that's a sick track. At around 3:45 you've got those snares speeding up, I think maybe a longer notice to the listener that the track will change or some effect in there might help in the adjustment towards that part as it's a very visible change (unless that's what you were aiming for), you know. Seriously good track though. :)


  • Registered Users Posts: 21 elseanino


    WasterEx wrote: »
    Like this, nice melody too, I left you a comment on Soundcloud earlier.
    I think a few interesting sound FX towards the end of the track would have done good as it goes on for a bit.

    Ah that was you! Thanks! :) Yeah I think it could do with a bit of selective editing towards the end as well. I did it in one take and sometimes I like to leave it just as it was made.....
    that's a nice track you've put up there as well. would like to hear the finished version. :)


  • Registered Users Posts: 21 elseanino


    DarkJager wrote: »
    Put this up a while ago and have been tweaking it a bit since. This is version 2 of the track, some elements changed and a small bit of eq'ing done. Quality isn't the best but any feedback is appreciated as it's an ongoing work.

    http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/u4ea-no-sleep-v2-wip

    I'm not a massive trance fan but I like this. good work :)


  • Registered Users Posts: 205 ✭✭Ravenholm


    http://soundcloud.com/ravenh0lm/vernal-ohm

    techno/idm style

    comments and feedback appreciated as always


  • Registered Users Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Attempt at something making something unsettling

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/flathan-bipdub


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  • Registered Users Posts: 205 ✭✭Ravenholm


    SteveDon wrote: »
    Attempt at something making something unsettling

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/flathan-bipdub

    great atmosphere and i like dubby echoes. Have you thought about a drifting echoing melody with some high notes to give it some variety? Just my 2 cents :)


  • Registered Users Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Ravenholm wrote: »
    great atmosphere and i like dubby echoes. Have you thought about a drifting echoing melody with some high notes to give it some variety? Just my 2 cents :)

    Cheers for listening mate, i did think of putting in a melody over the top, but couldnt quite find anything i liked, probably will go back to it at some stage.

    I had a listen to your track. I think you almost have too much going on in terms of melodies on top of eachother. Maybe have less going on but pump up that synths that are still present with some phattening type efx. Also little bit of a lack of bass going on. Otherwise nice arrangment!


  • Registered Users Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Another new abstracty electronic piece:
    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/flathan-dortimel

    Would be cool to hear some thoughts!


  • Registered Users Posts: 5,278 ✭✭✭mordeith


    SteveDon wrote: »
    Another new abstracty electronic piece:
    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/flathan-dortimel

    Would be cool to hear some thoughts!

    I think the this track and the previous one you posted could be very easily integrated into a movie soundtrack. Not sure that they have enough presence to be standalone tracks if you know what I mean but I can definitely see how they would add great atmosphere to a film scene or even the theme tune to a tv series.


  • Registered Users Posts: 1,830 ✭✭✭Be like Nutella


    Mashup of Florence and the Machine and DJ Rabbit Killer. Opinions welcomed..

    http://soundcloud.com/listothis/florence-vs-rabbit-killer-i-n


  • Registered Users Posts: 2,413 ✭✭✭Stab*City


    Picked up the Maschine and used some sounds on this hope ye enjoy it. All feedback welcome.

    http://soundcloud.com/carlitobriganti/carlito-briganti-artic-summer


  • Registered Users Posts: 2,413 ✭✭✭Stab*City


    DarkJager wrote: »
    Put this up a while ago and have been tweaking it a bit since. This is version 2 of the track, some elements changed and a small bit of eq'ing done. Quality isn't the best but any feedback is appreciated as it's an ongoing work.

    http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/u4ea-no-sleep-v2-wip

    Another quality production DarkJager!!


  • Registered Users Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Stab*City wrote: »
    Picked up the Maschine and used some sounds on this hope ye enjoy it. All feedback welcome.

    http://soundcloud.com/carlitobriganti/carlito-briganti-artic-summer

    Not bad mate, cant fault the production. Nice arppy synth going on. Im partial to a bit darker tracks myself but i like it!


  • Registered Users Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    I wanted to make something that sounded like it was recorded on a talkboy or something.

    Very Lo Fi garage burialesque sound:

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/flathan-tape-cassette-blues

    interested to hear thoughts as always!


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 7,960 ✭✭✭DarkJager


    Stab*City wrote: »
    Another quality production DarkJager!!

    Cheers bud! ;)
    SteveDon wrote: »
    I wanted to make something that sounded like it was recorded on a talkboy or something.

    Very Lo Fi garage burialesque sound:

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/flathan-tape-cassette-blues

    interested to hear thoughts as always!

    Really enjoyed listening to that Steve, every element fits it perfectly. Nice chilled vibe too, feel very calmed after it! :D

    This is another track I've been working on a while now, trying my hand for the first time at remixing something. Any feedback is much appreciated.

    http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/deadmau5-ft-kaskade-move-for


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  • Registered Users Posts: 2,413 ✭✭✭Stab*City


    SteveDon wrote: »
    I wanted to make something that sounded like it was recorded on a talkboy or something.

    Very Lo Fi garage burialesque sound:

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/flathan-tape-cassette-blues

    interested to hear thoughts as always!

    Very burialesque indeed.. Excellent track!! Great drums. What kind of effects do you run the drums through?


  • Registered Users Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Thanks for listening lads,

    To answer your question about the drums, just using drum samples from maschine, each individual sample has a different filter on it, they are then passed through limelite to dirty up the sound, then light distortion from a overdrive guitar pedal, then isotope vinyl effect.


  • Registered Users Posts: 2,413 ✭✭✭Stab*City


    SteveDon wrote: »
    Thanks for listening lads,

    To answer your question about the drums, just using drum samples from maschine, each individual sample has a different filter on it, they are then passed through limelite to dirty up the sound, then light distortion from a overdrive guitar pedal, then isotope vinyl effect.


    Thanks for that. I just picked up a Maschine @ the weekend. Love it so far.


  • Registered Users Posts: 909 ✭✭✭keithkk16


    Something different from myself, I tried to go with an experimental/ambient vibe
    for this one. This one's not for the dance floor. http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/scoob-wandering-around
    All feedback welcome please:)


  • Registered Users Posts: 12 dudeabides


    Hey, I'm new to all this mixing melarky Got my first tune up. Any feedback would be much appreciated. Please go easy on me people. The dude abides


    http://www.reverbnation.com/brianmonaghan77


  • Registered Users Posts: 2,413 ✭✭✭Stab*City


    One I've been working on since last night.. Hope you like and all comments welcome.
    http://soundcloud.com/carlitobriganti/carlito-briganti-everything


  • Registered Users Posts: 205 ✭✭Ravenholm




  • Registered Users Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Been a while since i made any house music, heres my latest effort:

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/stephen-donaldson-straight


  • Registered Users Posts: 2,413 ✭✭✭Stab*City




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  • Registered Users Posts: 5,278 ✭✭✭mordeith


    My weekends work..

    http://soundcloud.com/carlitobrigant...ti-accelerated __________________

    Nice work man. I think it's missing some kind of lead line though. You have a side-chained synth going on the the latter half of the song that could be brought to the fore a bit to give a bit of interest. I also think the kick stands out a tad too much. Other than that it's a good head nodder :D


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