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I have three tracks on Soundcloud. I use Reason 4.

Soundcloud.com/amber-wax

VinylJunkie

Been messing around with production on and off now for a while, this is only the second track Ive finished, Id love some feedback, I really wanna get stuck into this now.

http://soundcloud.com/seanc/kadewe-dont-make-house

Cheers

VinylJunkie

SteveDon wrote: »

Another odd track along the same lines... few mistakes in this one, the mix is questionable as well but i kinda like it being a bit raw.

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/cant-save-you-rough-mix

Very nice work Steve

SteveDon

VinylJunkie wrote: »

Been messing around with production on and off now for a while, this is only the second track Ive finished, Id love some feedback, I really wanna get stuck into this now.

http://soundcloud.com/seanc/kadewe-dont-make-house

Cheers

Not bad effort at all man. Although there is something about the stab that isnt doing it for me. Sounds a bit plasticy if ya get me, maybe try to fatten it up using a saturation effect or something or maybe layer it with something else. Some splattering of organic percs here and there could be good aswell, some bongo/conga type thing.

Very good effort for your first house track though, fair play!

SteveDon

Something ive been working on... Really want to do some more editing to it but my CPU cannot handle the amount of efx going on. Literally have to export every time i make a change to hear the difference.

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-fear-cpu-maximum-capicity

krd

SteveDon wrote: »

Something ive been working on... Really want to do some more editing to it but my CPU cannot handle the amount of efx going on. Literally have to export every time i make a change to hear the difference.

Why don't you just make some decisions and print the effects.

Even bounce down to a more manageable number of tracks and edit from there. Create a new project, and just start work with something like 8 tracks - if you screw up you can go back to the original.


It don't know what you're working on, but you've got some ideas there. The degraded wobbly C60 effect is cool. If you made it more clear for yourself - printing down tracks, you might get a better grip - and be able to clarify it.

WasterEx

SteveDon wrote: »

Really want to do some more editing to it but my CPU cannot handle the amount of efx going on. Literally have to export every time i make a change to hear the difference.

Same story with me, it's ridiculous but if you're using Ableton Live you can 'Freeze' multiple tracks (ones you're not adding automation/ FX to) and edit the ones you want. You can 'unfreeze' them after. It helps helps me save CPU anyway. I'm not sure if you can do that with other DAW's...

Nice tune btw, very chill, love the break at 2:56

VinylJunkie

Attempt number two, I dunno what's making me make this kind of track it's nothing like any of the records I own. Wwould love feedback, I'm still learning the ropes, will be trying my hand at a techno track at the weekend. Made this one in a few hours last night, my goal is to knock out a good few so I pick up different techniques an don't get bogged down in any one track.
http://soundcloud.com/seanc/kadewe-im-feeling-down-v2

Steve I'll give your tip on Saturation for the last one I made a try later tonight.

WasterEx

VinylJunkie wrote: »

Attempt number two, I dunno what's making me make this kind of track it's nothing like any of the records I own. Wwould love feedback, I'm still learning the ropes, will be trying my hand at a techno track at the weekend. Made this one in a few hours last night, my goal is to knock out a good few so I pick up different techniques an don't get bogged down in any one track.
http://soundcloud.com/seanc/kadewe-im-feeling-down-v2

Steve I'll give your tip on Saturation for the last one I made a try later tonight.

Sounds good..very lounge type House. A couple of things that stuck out to me was the double 'click' and piano at 1:46, it loses some of the vibe the entire track is setting imo.
Also you could try adding a saxophone in there I think it would work well from the vibe I got. All in all, good job so far.

WasterEx

Here's a track I just finished, was aiming for something kind of spontaneous. I think it turned out as expected but I'd appreciate feedback from anyone.
If you have time, check it out.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KhFV2wokIsg

Thanks.

VinylJunkie

WasterEx wrote: »

Sounds good..very lounge type House. A couple of things that stuck out to me was the double 'click' and piano at 1:46, it loses some of the vibe the entire track is setting imo.
Also you could try adding a saxophone in there I think it would work well from the vibe I got. All in all, good job so far.

Cheers yeah strange to be making this as I don't listen to it, agree on the part you talk about I'm still trying to work on builds/drops etc...

kunst nugget

Hi all, first one I've done in a while

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/toppers

Feedback as always much appreciated.

VinylJunkie

On a bit of a roll, this is the third one this week, still learning so feedback welcome.
http://soundcloud.com/seanc/break-out-rough-mix-v2

Plumpynutt

kunst nugget wrote: »

Hi all, first one I've done in a while

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/toppers

Feedback as always much appreciated.

Really liking this

kunst nugget

Plumpynutt wrote: »

Really liking this

Cheers, glad to hear it.

kunst nugget

dasdog wrote: »

Slow it down a bit

http://soundcloud.com/dasdog/includemapsagain

I would love to hear that break into a full techno stomper, especially after that 'Drummer, I want you to get real funky' sample, because what precedes it is pure getting ready for it.

kunst nugget

SteveDon wrote: »

Something ive been working on... Really want to do some more editing to it but my CPU cannot handle the amount of efx going on. Literally have to export every time i make a change to hear the difference.

http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-fear-cpu-maximum-capicity

I reckon if that made it to my iPod it would be stuck permanently on repeat. Stuff like that I call shoegazer house. Two small issues I'd have with it are the small break in the beat at around 2.40 is a tiny bit too long (or too short) so it nearly sounds like a mistake and when the appregiated high synth comes in after the first breakdown it would be nice to hear a bit more messing about with the freq and res of it to give it a bit more of a Shed like oomph.

kunst nugget

Another one I got finished over this weekend:
http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/to-yah

elliottt1

Hey Guys

This is a new track I'm working on. Not sure what genre it falls under... kind melodic electronica I suppose.

Some feedback would be great.

Cheers

https://soundcloud.com/s-k-rambles/whoop-whoop

narwhalthe

http://soundcloud.com/narwhalthegreat/internet-song

Made this on impulse tonight when my internet crashed for a half hour.

kunst nugget

Another one I just finished recently:

http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/untitled-document

VinylJunkie

This is something I've been working on the last few days, would love a bit of feedback. http://soundcloud.com/seanc/sean-conlan-all-about-you

Popmart97

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated - thanks

http://soundcloud.com/sine_cera/2mw

mordeith

Popmart97 wrote: »

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated - thanks

http://soundcloud.com/sine_cera/2mw

I like this overall but there's a few things that I'm not mad about. The off beat snare kinda makes it difficult to get into the track as it jolts you out of a regular rhythm (but maybe that's what you were going for). You have a nice bass line at the first half of the track and then discard it for the latter half. While the more pad like feel to the bass in the second half is cool, there is a level of funk missing with that earlier bassline gone. Final point is that the middle section which has a blippy kind of synth line, I'd rough that up a little by adding a bit of distortion, as it stands it's just a bit too clean for me.
Hope this doesn't p*ss you off too much!

Sky King

I was hungover and had a full day to spare yesterday so I recorded a live old skool kinda vibe.

Tis rough as a dogs danglies but i am trying to get a few of these sort of things together to maybe do something live... be interested in hearing (reading??) peoples thoughts..

Cheers

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FkixNjjXqh4

Popmart97

mordeith wrote: »

I like this overall but there's a few things that I'm not mad about. The off beat snare kinda makes it difficult to get into the track as it jolts you out of a regular rhythm (but maybe that's what you were going for). You have a nice bass line at the first half of the track and then discard it for the latter half. While the more pad like feel to the bass in the second half is cool, there is a level of funk missing with that earlier bassline gone. Final point is that the middle section which has a blippy kind of synth line, I'd rough that up a little by adding a bit of distortion, as it stands it's just a bit too clean for me.
Hope this doesn't p*ss you off too much!

Not at all, I appreciate you taking the time. All constructive!

Nightshad3

Hi guys

My choonage is on www.soundcloud.com/critical

any comments/advice/critisism is welcome

can you spot which ones were made on a playstation?

Be like Nutella

that Rossfest 2012 set rocks!!!!
http://soundcloud.com/critical/rossfest-2012


cheers for the DL.... real positive soundin skippy d'n'b breaky stuff, love it!


check this remix just did of Azealia Banks - 212.. ahem or 213 as I called it : )

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XUxEHg6TlA4&feature=plcp

jtsuited

preview of a 12 inch i've been working on for a very long time.
http://soundcloud.com/bawdcaster/theo-politik

Be like Nutella

http://soundcloud.com/listothis/mama-do-the-hump-vs-loca

comments welcome good or bad