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    #2
    BlitzKrieg
    Registered Users Posts: 14,685 ✭✭✭✭BlitzKrieg


    I'm having trouble opening the file :(


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    #3
    coolie cool
    Closed Accounts Posts: 15 ✭coolie cool


    its just pdf...you got adobe acrobat reader?


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    monkeyfudge
    Registered Users Posts: 23,216 ✭✭✭✭monkeyfudge


    Opens fine here. Will try and have a read through it when I get the chance.


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    #5
    coolie cool
    Closed Accounts Posts: 15 ✭coolie cool


    really appreciate it


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    Soul Stretcher
    Closed Accounts Posts: 153 ✭✭Soul Stretcher


    Hey... read it... seems cool...

    Its the first script I've read so my comments are weightless...

    Was expecting Andrea and Stephen to get together ?

    Who is your intended audience ? If its to be a TV drama thing, you'll probably want some sort of conclusive ending...

    I don't feel as if I got to know the "real" Andrea - like why is she flawed/ a fallen angel ? Did her husband leave her for a 20yr old Polish waitress ? Where is her pain coming from ? She's probably the most interesting character in it...

    The others seem like your average sociable reasonably successful (career and ladies) lads about town..

    Oh... and liked the facebook instant messaging thing... and liked the idea of sexual tension/possibility at parties/nite clubs etc.


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    coolie cool
    Closed Accounts Posts: 15 ✭coolie cool


    its kinda suposed to be a pilot....im sorry, i should have described it a bit more..so you would learn more should there be more episodes.....its meant to be aboutto 19/20 year olds wh are always clubbing in dublin


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    Soul Stretcher
    Closed Accounts Posts: 153 ✭✭Soul Stretcher


    Oh right cool... From my amateur viewpoint I would be most interested in seeing why Andrea acts the way she does in further episodes...

    But let me be schtum and allow the experienced people on here comment !

    Best of Luck btw... it's a great achievement producing a script like that...

    Oh..one last thing.... I'd probably make some effort to copyright it... just in case someone reads it here and then puts their name on it...


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    coolie cool
    Closed Accounts Posts: 15 ✭coolie cool


    yeah, i already have copyright on it.....which makes me feel a bit pomps...but better be safe than sorry


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    BlitzKrieg
    Registered Users Posts: 14,685 ✭✭✭✭BlitzKrieg


    Oh..one last thing.... I'd probably make some effort to copyright it... just in case someone reads it here and then puts their name on it...

    under irish law, copyright is automatically applied when a script is written. All he needs to do is prove he wrote it. Which this thread funnily enough helps with as his post has been dated.

    combine that with a few other processess (mailing it to oneself, emailing it, saving it on a third party hard drive etc) and he would have enough evidence to prove he wrote it first.


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