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  • 24-11-2009 7:43pm
    #1
    Closed Accounts Posts: 34


    hi there i just wanted to get an outsiders opinion. So what do ya think? Thanks (nothing too harsh please :) )



    i can't stay here...........

    chorus:
    oh and i cant stay here
    i see you though my tears
    but i cant seem to make sense
    and the atmosphere is so tense
    i need to leave..
    right here! right now!

    And this decision it aint my choice,
    its not what i asked for i dont want this,
    why cant you see this is what im soposed to be,
    stand back and see me !

    Realise open your eyes see past the curtin,
    do you see that im hurtin?
    And i just cant believe'
    that you'd leave me as i go on screamin,
    tearin out my hair but you dont care,
    you just lie,while i sit and cry,
    you think your just passin by,
    but you dont realise what you've done to me,
    you just take and take,
    but you can't seem to make the numbers add up,
    let me tell you somthin, do you know how hard im workin?

    Im a jump up and down,
    take a look around are u human?
    if you just want to ask me to do the task,
    then just relax,
    il tell you the truth,
    lets work from the root of the problem,
    i just need you to know,
    just how low you sunk,
    your just a wasted effort on my part,
    just a smudge on society at best,
    dont hold me down,
    i cant keep actin the clown in front of you,
    i wont bear the brunt of your resentment forever,
    wont you get to the core of your problems?

    Dont keep suckin me in im tryin ta run away,
    if your new lease of life is gona get in the way,
    i wont stay here,
    who do you think you are that was your last chance,
    you cant dance your way out of this one,
    look how far you've come,
    but no your just gona run to your car and drive away,
    or will you stay?

    It wont matter anyway,
    il never cry for you again,
    you'l never get what you want,
    if you just chew up your friends,
    we'l never get to the end of this,
    i think i've just missed the beat,
    and now im fallin,
    down all over again,
    you just dont understand,
    the hand of cards hasd been delt,
    i didnt know this is how you felt,
    this is where i finish,
    i hope one day you realise your lies,
    but for now its just goodbye ........................


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 2,980 ✭✭✭Kevster


    Apart from the spelling mistakes, it's fine. However, you are missing the point completely here because a song can be good and have completely meaningless lyrics (just ask REM). Lyrics are generally only as good as the music that accompanies them.


  • Registered Users Posts: 4,034 ✭✭✭rcaz




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