Suburbs C&C (+1 photo)

superflyninja

A (hopefully) slightly different take....













cheers

swingking

love the first 2 images. Great photography overall

Crispin

I find them a bit uninspiring tbh. Composition is a bit meh and as a set they don't really go together imo.
I have seen you produce much better.

chevron

love th first one something about it catches my attention. that rabbit thing in front is eerie.

if the street lights weren't so bright id love it more they tend to draw my attention away from the playground.

DK32

I like the 3rd one best.

My own opinion, I think it would be a much better picture overall if you cropped it tighter on either side.

ColmDawson

I like #1, #2 and #5. Were you going for a Christmas tree thing in #2?

Dublin_Gunner

The first one looks like you've badly replaced the sky, I dunno, just don;t like it. Everything looks like its been PS'd in lol

Love the colours in the last one, great pic.

superflyninja

Dublin_Gunner wrote: »

The first one looks like you've badly replaced the sky, I dunno, just don;t like it. Everything looks like its been PS'd in lol

Love the colours in the last one, great pic.

lol nope that is a 100% genuine

superflyninja

ColmDawson wrote: »

I like #1, #2 and #5. Were you going for a Christmas tree thing in #2?

lol not really.....but whatever your interpretation is

superflyninja

Crispin wrote: »

I find them a bit uninspiring tbh. Composition is a bit meh and as a set they don't really go together imo.
I have seen you produce much better.

any suggestions on improving the comp?
well my goals as a set was to highlight some of the more unorthodox beauty in the suburbs and I wanted the photos to be varied in colour scheme,atmosphere etc.

superflyninja

swingking wrote: »

love the first 2 images. Great photography overall

thanks

Crispin

superflyninja wrote: »

any suggestions on improving the comp?
.

Errrrr. No

Ok I will give you my 2 cents for what it's worth


#1 is the most interesting. I like the cat thingy in the foreground it's a contrast between the childish and housing behind but behind it the climbing frame kinda unbalances the image imo (whatever that means )

#2 is ok, but the sky is a weird colour and the light behind seems blown out. it's an interesting shape but not dynamic enough to hold my attention.

#3 has no point of interest as far as I am concerned. Maybe need to move elements off centre or choose a more interesting view point to make it work.

#4 is more dynamic than #2 and is interesting but the thick black line (rope) that cuts across the bottom third is too distracting. Also the PP is too dark at the top. I guess it was to give the appearance that the structure was disappearing into the sky but there is a lot of blank space at the top so that doesn't work for me.

#5 viewpoint is maybe too low, so the ugly looking climbing frame on the left really dominates the frame. Colours are nice though, but too much detail lost in the foreground objects. otherwise maybe silhouette one of a more recognisable shapes (i.e. the swings) could've worked better?!

#6 I like it I maybe would tilt it more if you took it again. it would make it look more purposeful and would've move the light off centre.

Dublin_Gunner

superflyninja wrote: »

lol nope that is a 100% genuine

I know, that what makes it look odd to me or something!

Nice shots though

superflyninja

Crispin wrote: »

Errrrr. No

Ok I will give you my 2 cents for what it's worth

cheers food for thought :d

Solarina

1, 2 and 3 - perfect. The others lack their wow/pop factor I think. If you need to have 6 images Id shoot another 3 more, otherwise edit down to those 3, I really like them