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The Miracle Worker [3min Horror]

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  • 11-01-2010 3:54pm
    #1
    JonsterMonster
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2 ✭


    Hi,

    I've recently made a horror film to be entered into the UK Paranormal Activity DVD competition and would appriecate some feedback people other than friends. It's a dark adaptation on the story of Helen Keller, or at least that was the stimulas for the film.

    If you've 2 minutes and 55 seconds to spare, check it out on YouTube

    Thanks for your time biggrin.gif


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    #2
    Norman213
    Closed Accounts Posts: 60 ✭✭Norman213


    very cool. loved the colour (or lack of) throughout.would love to make something even half as atmospheric as that!


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    Doomofman
    Registered Users Posts: 1,093 ✭✭✭Doomofman


    It's pretty good for the most part... It seems like the color/feel of the shots changes about half when through with the first close up of the camera guy... Before that it's dark and a bit grainy and suddenly it's dark green and really clear... That kinda threw me a bit... Also I think the 'gore' shot is really unnecessary and really took away from the movie as a whole, up until that point it was a nice atmospheric piece with that shock at the end... Then the 'gore' shot just makes it feel ridiculous... You could have had that shot replaced with a shot of like the camera guys leg twitching on the ground or being dragged or something... So that's my biggest gripe with it...


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    JonsterMonster
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2 ✭JonsterMonster


    I agree with you, Doom, I do. There's obviously certain clichés I need to get outta my system before I make anything of real depth. I just fancied seeing the actor crew raw liver...


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