Gaudi Lizard Parc Guell C+C

the_monkey

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I like 2 and 3 best ... the fake blur is too obvious in #1

DotOrg

shadow on the mouth in number 1 ruins it as well as the not brilliant composition, it's too centred


second is best though it's still too much in the centre

third is ruined by the fake vignette

Does nothing for me either, I'm afraid. I'm not getting a sense of the place at all.

the_monkey

harsh....

Kintarō Hattori

the_monkey wrote: »

harsh....

Comments and criticism...... you asked for it.

Nisio

From what I remember of the park this piece is part of the main staircase? Given the number of visitors on the staircase I found it hard to get the shots I wanted.

I think the crop in the shots falls between two stools; it's a bit too tight on the head (guessing that's why you've made the background dark in the shots?). Maybe a wider view showing more of the piece with maybe a shallow DoF and the head in focus or a macro/abstract type shot of the tiling on the head would be cool.

Thecageyone

3rd one is the best, for reasons already mentioned [the shadow is bad in the first, and first and second are too centralised] much better p.o.v in the 3rd, but I think it would be much better with less of a vignette.

the_monkey

Kintarō Hattori wrote: »

Comments and criticism...... you asked for it.

Of Course!!!

and i appreciate it !!!

the_monkey

As it's a crowded place it is tough to get a shot without people hence
the exagerrated vignetting and composition ...