Love N Music

djeddy

Synopsis

Place and time

Modern Day World

I ACT

Scene 1 Somewhere in to days world,

Four young people seek to change the world for the better by the use of their artistic talents,

These people have never met in person,but share a common dream between them,

Their hope is to meet other people of like mind,

Anne works in a music store part time,but dreams of being a professional singer and music teacher,

Trisha is a student of the arts and philosophy,

Dave is a carpenter,write songs in his spare time,

John is a farmer, poet playwrite and composer,

Then one day their dream of meeting like minded people suddenly happens,with the flutter of dove wings and a flash of light the four young people find themselves in a castle together,

End of scene 1

Scene 2

They feel quite @ home in each others company,
Like as if they all ways knew eachother,
They know they are in the castle for a mission

II ACT

Scene 1

They talk out ideas for a musical and exchange contact info,
Gentle music starts playing,and doves fly about
Then in a flash of light they find themselves back home

Scene 2

They contact each other and meet up in real life
Put together their musical to be played @ the castle ball,

III ACT
They are the last act to be playing @ the castle ball on the night,
The curtain comes down on the act before them,
Now it is their turn to hit the stage
The four of them are on stage now with backing
singers
dancers and musicans all in place

The curtain goes up and the crowd are on their feet singing
and clapping to the sound of the music and song,
Calling out for more as the band comes to the end of their set

cobsie

The dramatic arc of a story usually needs some kind of conflict or obstacle to be overcome, to give it dramatic tension. The protagonists need to struggle, in order to earn their success. This has been the formula for drama since the Greeks and there's something to be said for it

You might think about introducing that, between Acts II & III - something gets in the way of their endeavours. Otherwise, it reads like a bland but pleasant dream.

djeddy

cobsie wrote: »

The dramatic arc of a story usually needs some kind of conflict or obstacle to be overcome, to give it dramatic tension. The protagonists need to struggle, in order to earn their success. This has been the formula for drama since the Greeks and there's something to be said for it

You might think about introducing that, between Acts II & III - something gets in the way of their endeavours. Otherwise, it reads like a bland but pleasant dream.

Hey thanks for advise,

I shall get my thinking cap on