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  • 23-11-2010 4:22am
    #1
    shopndrop
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2 ✭shopndrop


    Hi everyone , I am Craig 20, in band called "The Loose Connections".

    I started out writing song since the age of 12

    The song below had been written for the homeless in the world and I am trying to raise awareness for them in the run up to xmas, please share it around if you like it. But most importantly let me know what you think would really appreciate some opinions thanks :)

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LgntgOGI-L4


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  • #2
    Romina Gifted Backward
    Posts: 0 ✭✭ Romina Gifted Backward


    Heya,

    Had a listen to this, it wouldn't really be to my taste, but it is definitely a well constructed song and well recorded. I would suggest that at the start of the song the singer should sing the first verse in a lower register as it would add a bit of momentum to the progression of the song. Also, barring the first chorus of "He's an honest broken man" I think it would sound really well if there was 2 or 3 voices singing the chorus line in melody behind the lead vocal. That would add a bit of weight to the hook line. If you have any more stuff you should link it. Best of luck.


  • #3
    Knex*
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 22,477 ✭✭✭✭Knex*


    Romina Gifted Backward wrote: »
    Heya,

    Also, barring the first chorus of "He's an honest broken man" I think it would sound really well if there was 2 or 3 voices singing the chorus line in melody behind the lead vocal.

    +1 for this.

    I like the song a lot, its right up my street in terms of style and something I could even see myself strumming along to on my own guitar.:)


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