Trying something new with black and white. Do you think it works?

achtungbarry · 26-03-2011 5:26pm #1

Basically what I've done is create a soft focus effect (which itself is not typical for a cityscape). I created a gaussian blurred layer in Photoshop and then reduced its opacity to give the soft focus effect often used in portraiture. I then boosted the contrast in curves to put back some of the contrast lost in the soft focus step.

I am trying to create a smoother transition between the tones while still retaining detail and enough sharpness.

Do you think it works? Any feedback and c and c welcome.

mlumley · 26-03-2011 5:30pm

I like it, excpt for the light patch on the building on the left, and also the bridge on the right seems a bit too blured. otherwise, nice one.

Promac · 26-03-2011 6:12pm

I like the tone and light but I find it a little bit soft for my liking. How about a high-pass filter to bring out the edges a bit?

Edit: Easy enough to show what I mean - hope you don't mind the addition.

DaireQuinlan · 26-03-2011 6:47pm

I think it looks awful, doesn't add anything at all to the picture IMO. If you persist in doing it though you absolutely have to get rid of that heavy vignette around the outside of the image.

Fajitas! · 26-03-2011 6:50pm

+1

The vignette is rotten, the blur looks out of place and unnessicary...

achtungbarry · 26-03-2011 7:03pm

Thanks for the feedback so far. It is one of those things that you spend so long staring at that you don't know if you've wrecked it or not. It usually takes a fresh look the next day or a few outside opinions. Still undecided.

ThOnda · 26-03-2011 7:15pm

Does not work for me, sorry. Vignette, blur and HDR-like loss of crispness just puts it down. Sorry.

sineadw · 26-03-2011 7:29pm

Barry I'd love to see the original. I agree with the others I'm afraid - the Vignette put me off straight away, and the HDRyness (I made a word

) really detracts from what might be a nice shot IMHO. There's enough drama in the shape of the bridge - no need to be adding so much.

Then again, I've become extremely allergic to shots of the Beckett Bridge :rolleyes:

ThePhilipify · 27-03-2011 2:15pm

Don't think the effect works here, might work for some other shots but in this one its a miss.

CabanSail · 28-03-2011 9:24am

Rather than feic around in PS you could get the same effect using a cheap lens, except the vignette would be round.

Trying something new with black and white. Do you think it works?

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