BELFAST RAP!!

ayman23

A track recorded a few months ago, check it out lads and let me know what you all think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7YHcByGtEEk

Boom_Bap

Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but that is painful to listen to regardless of the sound quality.
You're line structure is all over the place and you are not rhyming with the beat at all.

Shapey Fiend

Needs a lot more work. Get a proper microphone. Put the rhyming word after the snare. Make each line the same number of syllables (ish). And just practice a lot.

Listen to some other Norn Iron rappers might give you an idea of how it's done.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DWKNU-aDzf8

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ib5NwzGMdMs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0JzVSmCel_0

conor.hogan.2

That track (sketch nines one) is getting some serious youtube hate, when it is a very solid first track.

Shapey Fiend

Most people are hostile towards the whole idea of white Irish people rapping. Same old. They'll get over it. As I said before at least it's getting noticed. SertOne (who produced Sketches track) has a beautiful video on that channel and it only got 400 hits.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Gs1fKM1HUg

conor.hogan.2

Sertone has some good mixes, decent producer by the sounds of it too.