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Trying to write a book

  • 30-11-2012 5:52pm
    #1
    pitythefool
    Registered Users Posts: 716 ✭✭✭


    Hi all

    I am trying to write a book and all i have so far is

    I awoke at dawn.

    Could people please help me out one sentenct at a time
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  • #2
    Gee_G
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 2,208 ✭✭✭Gee_G


    pitythefool wrote: »
    Hi all

    I am trying to write a book and all i have so far is

    I awoke at dawn.

    Could people please help me out one sentenct at a time
    This is going to be good :D


  • #3
    lowelife
    Registered Users Posts: 586 ✭✭✭lowelife


    pitythefool wrote: »
    Hi all

    I am trying to write a book and all i have so far is

    I awoke at dawn.

    Could people please help me out one sentenct at a time

    Can I just be a proof reader here.....I see a mistake already and I'm $hit at speeling :rolleyes:


  • #4
    pitythefool
    Registered Users Posts: 716 ✭✭✭pitythefool


    Gee_G wrote: »
    This is going to be good :D
    feel free to add the next sentence then


  • #5
    [Deleted User]
    Posts: 0 ✭ [Deleted User]


    And I gazed down at my glorious genitles


  • #6
    pjproby
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 842 ✭✭✭pjproby


    ....and she was gone.


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  • #7
    Tom Joad
    Closed Accounts Posts: 4,134 ✭✭✭Tom Joad


    lowelife wrote: »
    Can I just be a proof reader here.....I see a mistake already and I'm $hit at speeling :rolleyes:

    Ha ha I see what you done there!


  • #8
    Lapin
    Banned (with Prison Access) Posts: 18,184 ✭✭✭✭Lapin


    pitythefool wrote: »

    I awoke at dawn.


    And set out to find my spiritual home.


  • #9
    GLaDOS
    Moderators, Regional East Moderators Posts: 23,224 Mod ✭✭✭✭GLaDOS


    The End

    Cake, and grief counseling, will be available at the conclusion of the test



  • #10
    pitythefool
    Registered Users Posts: 716 ✭✭✭pitythefool


    lowelife wrote: »
    Can I just be a proof reader here.....I see a mistake already and I'm $hit at speeling :rolleyes:

    please do, what we can do is coppy and paste the story so far into the next comment

    I awoke at dawn


  • #11
    partyatmygaff
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 10,992 ✭✭✭✭partyatmygaff


    I awoke at dawn and mowed the lawn while eating a plate of succulent prawns.


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  • #12
    OneArt
    Registered Users Posts: 1,910 ✭✭✭OneArt


    I awoke at dawn.

    I knew Siobhan was coming for us. I could hear her characteristic sniffing down the corridor. The clap-clap of her high heels. An amateur plastic surgeon coming to play with her toys.


  • #13
    pitythefool
    Registered Users Posts: 716 ✭✭✭pitythefool


    Lapin wrote: »
    And set out to find my spiritual home.

    I awoke at dawn and set out to find my spiritual home


  • #14
    El Weirdo
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 11,647 ✭✭✭✭El Weirdo


    More suited to here.


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