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What do you think of my lyrics?

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  • 26-11-2013 12:59am
    #1
    swmusicireland
    Registered Users Posts: 1 ✭


    He needs his mother
    To take care of his problems
    Cause without he is nothing

    He's lost his lover
    She's ran away from the drama
    Crossed the border to her father

    A baby was born
    Landed on the doorstep
    With a note by its side
    Saying "You deserve this"

    He has been brought right down to his knees
    A magical existence, a magical existence
    The one he thought he loved
    Has fled into the distance, to the distance

    No support on his shoulders
    He's collapsed under the pressure
    Takes his anger out on his pipe
    The fumes explore his mind
    Takes him away to better times
    But the decisions he makes are just not right

    Oh Jesus Christ, can you please forgive this man?
    For he does not know what he has done
    His son needs some light in his already bleak and trouble life
    The higher figures he has are just not right, they are just not right

    He's got nowhere to run
    He feels he needs to die
    So he pulls out his gun
    & lets the bullets fly

    Oh it's a beautiful death
    It's a beautiful death
    A beautiful death
    Beautiful death
    Beautiful, beautiful
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    #2
    Evil Robot
    Registered Users Posts: 41 ✭Evil Robot


    Cool.


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    #3
    9959
    Registered Users Posts: 1,785 ✭✭✭9959


    Fab.


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    #4
    Oink
    Moderators, Music Moderators Posts: 2,159 Mod ✭✭✭✭Oink


    Evil Robot wrote: »
    Cool.
    9959 wrote: »
    Fab.

    My sarcasm sense is tingling. Careful now.

    Mama always said, if you ain't got nothing nice to say, say nothing at all.

    /Mod.


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    #5
    Kettleson
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,047 ✭✭✭Kettleson


    Heavy in a powerful way...the third verse particularly so for me, brutally psychopathic.

    Are you putting this to music?

    Personally I'd finding the lyrics hard to fit into any other genre other then death metal, or off the wall avant garde experimental stuff, where the lyrics would probably be as good as any out there.

    Whatever way you look at, the lyrics have a definite impact.


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