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lilmissprincess

Is there a medium that i don't know,
A matter of communication,
Through skin and pulpy strange objects
To you

Is there someone who can speak
And get through this firewall on the banks
Perhaps explosive but effective
To You

Can there exist an insect so minute,
To creep in thre and reveal the truth?
To charter an inch of ego away from your mind,
To let you know.

How the human being feels is not your priority,
Just to ensure a safe home for your pride,
Well I've done my time, I've waited in line,
You missed your last chance,
Goodbye

Le Rack

Lisa what have I told you!
Some good imagery in there though but a wee bit too vivid for certain liking!

lilmissprincess

well rach, what have you told me? no seriously, i can't remember..

cuddles

hi gud poem pet nice imagery..

randomhuman

The first three stanzas are pretty good, but the last one lets it down. Especailly the last two lines.

lilmissprincess

but you see its telling the person a message they should get, the first three stanzas are the person thinking how to get through to someone, then telling them in the last thatn they are sick of trying.