Here are some Poems I've done

Megatron

the first one is about the North ....

For Peace and Tranquility is all i ask
but for some it's a laborius task
I don't think they get bored or even fed up
But rather they want to fill a private cup

Will I,We,You ever see peace in the north
no one knows ask in any port
With death,Lying and subderfudge it's hard to see the dotted line
with both sides repeating they same old rhyme

I know that both have their own points of view
but they have got to live in the same community just like me and you
Pride is a wall with many different sides
but there sould be only one ending of disarmenment seen through open eyes

Things have improved there is no doubting that,
Unless your a blinded incohearent rat
Both sides have aired both sides have greived
just stop bringing it up toget the other side peeved
It's time for talk and the nessary action
and a mutal agreement without an catches on.


K, the next one is well read and decide

I am not who i am
I am not wo i want
But everyday i start a fresh hunt

I'm not that confident or full of belief
I keep to myself and don't cause much grief
People come and people go but friends are scarce and precious things
and this brings me to the problem that has rattled my bin
to know who is who and what is what and how to find the most elusive plot
to conqure aquire and store that info and then with me it rows into my afro

I do have friends good and bad
but if i didn't i'd know i'd beed had
for with everything in life
there is the battle, hardship, hearthache not to mentioin strife

I'm sitting here in my job
the one where you work not the one that bobs
It's so easy to do that you feel like quitting,
but then i'd be back on the dole stuck in the kitchen sweating,
looking from bill to bill with eyes getting moist
but hey it could be worse
i could be the orange Ally McCoist !!!!

the fnj

There is no law that says poetry has to rhyme!

Your forcing each line to rhyme to a AA BB format. You should never ever have to force poetry otherwise it just sound corny and ends up being little more than a glorified limerick. Try writing about how these issues affect you personally and try to write honestly about them. I’m confident you’ll be much happier with the work you produce.

Blitzkrieger

Yeah - I think the search for rhyme is forcing you to add lines that aren't well thought through. Overall it seems immature. Better than I could do though

Da Bounca

If he is confident ,
then so am i,
go back to writing,
and do not lie.

Write from your heart,
but not like a tart,
Doing that is just not on.
Now i must go,
for my nose needs a blow,
good luck in the future Megatron.

GoneShootin

there once was a man from nantucket [etc]